1. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When an autistic priest is locked up in an insane asylum he must convince his psychiatrist that God is real.

    Viggo ZL Penpusher

    Cool idea! Sounds like it has a lot of potential for drama, tension and interesting discussions. Maybe you could clarify why the priest has to convince the psychiatrist? Is it in order to escape?

    Cool idea! Sounds like it has a lot of potential for drama, tension and interesting discussions. Maybe you could clarify why the priest has to convince the psychiatrist? Is it in order to escape?

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When the co-worker nobody likes is named boss and turns the office-building into a claustrophobic dictatorship, a soon-to-be-retired pessimist must help his colleagues escape before their co-worker goes all Voldemort on them.

    Odarka Penpusher

    maybe change Voldemort to "berserk" or "ape"?

    maybe change Voldemort to “berserk” or “ape”?

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    A kindergarten teacher, whose only friends are her dog and her students, gets fired and decides to teach her dog how to attack other people so she can get revenge on her boss and be with her students again.

    Odarka Penpusher

    Sounds like an interesting story, but maybe make the logline shorter? When a lonely kindergarten teacher is fired, she trains her dog to exact revenge on her boss.

    Sounds like an interesting story, but maybe make the logline shorter? When a lonely kindergarten teacher is fired, she trains her dog to exact revenge on her boss.

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