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A bored Barista becomes a teacher at a school in the town of Homewardsboundsville MO, where students with special abilities are being tested on. He not only has to navigate the strange characters and environment but figure out how to stop the downfall of this generation of mankind.
Hi Christopherandre25, INTENTION: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. OBSTACLE: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. (quite an obstacle ha.) First off - there's a lot of ornamental for a logline. I'm not sure what him being a "bored barista" has tRead more
Hi Christopherandre25,
INTENTION: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind.
OBSTACLE: figure out how to stop downfall of this generation of mankind. (quite an obstacle ha.)
First off – there’s a lot of ornamental for a logline. I’m not sure what him being a “bored barista” has to do with anything.
Lets see…
When he moves to a town filled with children with special abilities, a teacher must (stop the downfall of this generation of mankind?) *** you need to be very specific and clear how he’s going to do this.
before/or else. What happens if he doesn’t?
Hope this helps.
See lessA christian struggles with his fate when his new neighbours are satanists, this is how he discovers he is actually the devil himself. “668 the neighbour of the beast”
Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast. However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself. Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast? Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters? This sRead more
Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast.
However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself.
Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast?
Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters?
This seems a little confusing as written.
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The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin? And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin?
And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
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