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Two incompetent, drunken corporate video producers toil aimlessly at the bottom of a barrel no-one wants to scrape and, as they owe money to a sadistic, Ealing comedy-loving, international crime boss, they have to take increasingly frantic measures to save their lives and reproductive organs.
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success? Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conRead more
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success?
Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conflict) you should indicate that in the logline.
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From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.
From a logline perspective, I think it is all there.
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This is much stronger in my opinion. I would consider doing a bit of an American History X type thing, where the kid sister is maybe caught tagging her school or something and the protagonist doesn't want her to follow his path. Maybe he barely speaks to his parents because of his criminal activitieRead more
This is much stronger in my opinion.
I would consider doing a bit of an American History X type thing, where the kid sister is maybe caught tagging her school or something and the protagonist doesn’t want her to follow his path. Maybe he barely speaks to his parents because of his criminal activities but he tries to meet up with his sister without them knowing because they really don’t approve and believe he will lead her down the same path. On the flip side, maybe his parents ignored him when his baby sister came along. This would give more scope for conflict externally and internally.
Either way, it’s definitely getting there. I can see this as a Dramedy so I reckon you could have it in either Comedy or Drama and it would work.
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