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A christian struggles with his fate when his new neighbours are satanists, this is how he discovers he is actually the devil himself. “668 the neighbour of the beast”
Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast. However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself. Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast? Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters? This sRead more
Your logline seems to indicate that the lead character is the neighbor of the beast.
However, it also seems to read that the lead character is the devil himself.
Is the lead character the beast or is his neighbor the beast?
Or in this story, is the Devil and the Beast two separate characters?
This seems a little confusing as written.
See lessWhen a veteran and a rookie contract killer takes a shortcut, it results in killing the wrong guy for a mafia kingpin. They race against time as they try to replace the intended target with another body before ending up next on the hit-list: A real killer story.
The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin? And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
The intended target is still alive. So how will replacing the body of wrong victim with the body of another wrong victim change the situation? How will that fool the mafia kingpin?
And who is the protagonist, the pov character, the veteran or the rookie?
See lessTwo incompetent, drunken corporate video producers toil aimlessly at the bottom of a barrel no-one wants to scrape and, as they owe money to a sadistic, Ealing comedy-loving, international crime boss, they have to take increasingly frantic measures to save their lives and reproductive organs.
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success? Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conRead more
What is the ultimate goal of the lead character? What defines success?
Also why two lead characters? You describe them as the same, they are both incompetent, drunken corporate video producers. If they are the same why not have one lead character? If they are different (In a way that will create conflict) you should indicate that in the logline.
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