1. Posted: July 11, 2020In:

    Upon being diagnosed with lung cancer, a lifetime litterbug tries to make the world beautiful for his depressed granddaughter before he dies.

    YaelEinstein Penpusher

    I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.

    I love the goal, it makes for a very innocent and kind-hearted story, especially with two people that seem to be in quite hopeless situations. Not sure how it’s a comedy due to the utter hopelessness of the protag and his granddaughter, unless it’s a black comedy which could be fun.

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2020In:

    When a non-verbal young chef learns that her signature dish has been ripped off by a rival, she must win over a new elite clientele with her intuitive understanding of flavour and micro-dosing.

    dpg Singularity

    Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite -- or else. And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she's already established her reputation with one smash hit, what's so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?

    Again: what are the stakes? She must win over a new elite — or else.

    And what is the obstacle that stands in her way? If she’s already established her reputation with one smash hit, what’s so hard about winning her clientele back , or a building a new one, with another dish?

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  3. Posted: July 4, 2020In:

    A newly hired purchasing manager with a hidden gambling problem tries to save a company from sinking from relentless pilfering by its former-CEO and employees and himself.

    IvyEight6 Penpusher

    I love this story. I hope this get made someday.

    I love this story. I hope this get made someday.

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