1. Posted: July 1, 2020In:

    In a city devastated by an economic crisis, a vicious writer stuck finishing his first novel, falls in love with Alma (24) a talented photographer, and when she goes to another country for a job and he is left alone, he loses everything, and will have to get up by himself, finish his novel and to go after. Or will it be too late?

    Leon Davis Logliner

    How about: When a troubled writer falls for a girl and they move in together but she takes a job in another country he must decide to let resolve his (jealousy) or let her go. If you study the above formula for a logline it will fall into place.

    How about:
    When a troubled writer falls for a girl and they move in together but she takes a job in another country he must decide to let resolve his (jealousy) or let her go.
    If you study the above formula for a logline it will fall into place.

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  2. Posted: June 29, 2020In:

    After an actual demon possesses his wife during rehearsals for a stage version of The Exorcist, a spineless director must fight his demonic spouse to save the cast and crew.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I'm currently writing - it's aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.

    This is a logline for a mockumentary (fake documentary) I’m currently writing – it’s aimed at being a contained horror-comedy.

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  3. Posted: June 18, 2020In:

    Four mentally ill college students must race against time to stop their professor from being murdered by a mob boss.

    Richiev Singularity

    There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?

    There are definitely elements here, but you have left out the inciting incident. Why is the Mob boss going to kill their professor?

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