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  1. Posted: August 22, 2019In: Comedy

    A remorseless investment banker is fired and, in a twist of fate, taken in by the family whose Indian restaurant business he helped bankrupt in a recession. Forced to work as a bus boy to make ends meet, he learns the errors of his ways.

    Bollywoodbabe Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 24, 2019 at 7:08 pm

    Like it. Though don?t show the Indian family as very wise, holier than thou bunch. That will be a cliche.

    Like it. Though don?t show the Indian family as very wise, holier than thou bunch. That will be a cliche.

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2019In: Comedy

    After accidentally causing the death of his best friend and co-worker who plummeted to his death, ?a professional bungee jumper struggles with crippling acrophobia whilst confronting his guilt and loss.  

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 24, 2019 at 12:52 am

    A comedy??? What's so funny about causing the death of one's best friend?

    A comedy??? What’s so funny about causing the death of one’s best friend?

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2019In: Comedy

    After discovering her utopian town is the result of a government experiment, a tenacious teenage girl must reverse the symbiosis before it becomes permanent, or risk a fate worse than repressive governmental overreach: being just like everyone else.

    yqwertz Mentor
    Added an answer on August 23, 2019 at 6:04 pm

    As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word "symbiosis", but also "repressive government overreach" and "just like everyone else". What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving?Read more

    As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word “symbiosis”, but also “repressive government overreach” and “just like everyone else”.

    What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving? Or is it just the girl who is being deceived and not the entire town?

    One of the teenagers in “American Beauty” is afraid of being like everyone else, but her chosen path to escape the fate of the common man turns out to be a dead end. What is so ominous about being just like everyone else?

    You placed the logline under “Comedy”, but I don’t see the comedic elements.

     

     

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