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  1. Posted: August 17, 2019In: Comedy

    A young, shallow and cellphone addicted woman awakens in a parallel universe where the internet was not invented in 1983 and must find a way to survive without Facebook, Twitter and Instagram.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 17, 2019 at 2:33 pm

    This logline is a little confusing, I would take out '1983' because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983. However after reading this a couple times I don't think that is when the story takes place.

    This logline is a little confusing, I would take out ‘1983’ because as written it reads as if the story takes place in 1983.

    However after reading this a couple times I don’t think that is when the story takes place.

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  2. Posted: August 16, 2019In: Comedy

    An oddball dishwasher tries to convince his imaginary girlfriend not to break up with him on a date during the restaurant after hours. [SHORT FILM]

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on August 17, 2019 at 6:14 am

    Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn't change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)  

    Your logline has a lead character, goal, conflict and a hook as well. I wouldn’t change very much about this logline. (Think of it as minor tweeking if you decide to change something)

     

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2019In: Comedy

    It’s the year 2030 and Teller is working at becoming Supreme Leader with the help of his good friends and the absurd seems to be working.

    UnboundWriter Logliner
    Added an answer on August 8, 2019 at 1:28 pm

    To those that hissed that whatever I may do is doomed you should all know that today this very script got selected to be on a site that only accepts a few and is highly respected in this game. They read the script not the log line and because of you triggered lot I changed the log line to some degreRead more

    To those that hissed that whatever I may do is doomed you should all know that today this very script got selected to be on a site that only accepts a few and is highly respected in this game. They read the script not the log line and because of you triggered lot I changed the log line to some degree because triggering is not my goal here it’s laughter.

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