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Four intertwined stories between young people in a single night smoking weed on 4/20.
It's a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn't win?
It’s a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn’t win?
See lessA transgender young woman has to dress up as a man to rejoin a boy band she was fired from.
Is there any reason as to why she does this? Structure: A [what] young woman [must] dress up as a male to join a boy band [because why]. Comedy loglines work best if there is a sense of irony included, so for example, "a transgender woman must dress up as a new man in order to rejoin the boy band shRead more
Is there any reason as to why she does this?
Structure: A [what] young woman [must] dress up as a male to join a boy band [because why].
Comedy loglines work best if there is a sense of irony included, so for example, “a transgender woman must dress up as a new man in order to rejoin the boy band she was fired from,” would work a bit better because the irony of one turning transgender – only to subsequently pretend to be the gender they were born as – subtly hints at the stakes of the story.
Find something that suits your character so that it can help juxtapose against the grain of your premise. Just remember that stakes are a must for loglines, whereas irony is a key to comedy.
See lessWhen a miserable man on the brink of divorce finds out that both he and his wife are having an affair with the same woman, he must win the love of the mistress before his wife does.
Hi SeanKingston, Here's what I see: "On the verge of divorce, a man discovers he and his wife are cheating on each other with the same woman and must win his mistress's heart before his wife does." I hope this helps Good Luck
Hi SeanKingston,
Here’s what I see:
“On the verge of divorce, a man discovers he and his wife are cheating on each other with the same woman and must win his mistress’s heart before his wife does.”
I hope this helps
Good Luck
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