1. Posted: September 29, 2022In:

    A dysfunctional young man with a history of being unable to assimilate into normal society needs help in winning a local golf tournament and believes it comes from a talking golf ball.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi Donn Curbow, This is how I see it: "To win a local golf tournament, a dysfunctional young man asks a talking golf ball to help him win a local golf tournament." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Donn Curbow,

    This is how I see it:

    “To win a local golf tournament, a dysfunctional young man asks a talking golf ball to help him win a local golf tournament.”

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 9, 2022In:

    A man goes to a class reunion his high school classmate he pined for only to find out she became famous.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi tony18, This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest 1- Correcting grammar/spelling 2- Use the logline "generator" and/or 3- Click on the "Formula" icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully. Good Luck

    Hi tony18,

    This sounds like a synopsis more than a logline to me. You are telling your story in a short paragraph. I suggest
    1- Correcting grammar/spelling
    2- Use the logline “generator”
    and/or
    3- Click on the “Formula” icon at the top of this page and study the content carefully.

    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 10, 2022In:

    Four intertwined stories between young people in a single night smoking weed on 4/20.

    Marlene2 Penpusher

    It's a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn't win?

    It’s a description but from what I understand about loglines there has to be more. What is the struggle between the protagonist and antagonist? What happens if the protagonist doesn’t win?

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