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  1. Posted: March 19, 2019In: Comedy

    “When he discovers his multi-million dollar trust fund is locked away behind legal red tape, a broke Nigerian Prince uses the internet in order to convince highly pessimistic Americans to help him raise the money, so his funds will be released.”—- (Practice Logline)—- Title: Trust me (Maybe-Go fund me)

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on March 20, 2019 at 9:14 am

    Another way this might be clarified is that he starts honest and soon sees the scam (a friend or relative does it) as his best chance at the money. It could also be his last hope after other things fail. But again, what would be the story after that? If the spoiled part remains, then the stakes of mRead more

    Another way this might be clarified is that he starts honest and soon sees the scam (a friend or relative does it) as his best chance at the money. It could also be his last hope after other things fail. But again, what would be the story after that?

    If the spoiled part remains, then the stakes of money might work if this is clarified as a wrong pursuit (where he learns near the end of the script to use the money for others and not himself).

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  2. Posted: March 16, 2019In: Comedy

    Comedic Drama Tv series: When a Nigerian foreign exchange student moves in with a white suburban, American family, cultural differences and close minded town ideals turns the once home, into a house of unrelated individuals

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    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on March 18, 2019 at 7:26 am

    Good start.Black-white feels old and soft. Is there more to it?? Assuming it's America, is there any thought of an Arab or Mexican student?Can't imagine the parents letting it get so far, they'd end the exchange agreement and arrange for another family to take him, no? It's not like an adopted childRead more

    Good start.

    Black-white feels old and soft. Is there more to it?? Assuming it’s America, is there any thought of an Arab or Mexican student?

    Can’t imagine the parents letting it get so far, they’d end the exchange agreement and arrange for another family to take him, no? It’s not like an adopted child.

    Add a paragraph to mention the key characters and their situations.

    Is this a one-hour show or half hour? If the latter, any thought about the format…single-camera or multi? This will help with the mental picture and tone.

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2019In: Comedy

    (REVISED) When the royal lookalike he’s babysitting turns out to be the real Queen Elizabeth, a low-level ceremonial guard must assume the highest responsibility in the land when European Terrorists take over Buckingham Palace.

    Robb Ross Samurai
    Added an answer on March 15, 2019 at 4:56 am

    Cute.? The lookalike part sounds like a detail for the script. For the logline, the hook is this lowly guy having to protect the queen. Or clarify how the lookalike part matters beyond the setup.

    Cute.? The lookalike part sounds like a detail for the script. For the logline, the hook is this lowly guy having to protect the queen. Or clarify how the lookalike part matters beyond the setup.

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