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  1. Posted: September 17, 2015In: Comedy

    a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.

    Dbaptiste3813 Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 26, 2018 at 2:54 am

    This sounds like it could be a good dark comedy. ?On his past? I just wanna know why, is it childhood, are they ex co workers, ex lovers? Good work tho i got it on the first read.

    This sounds like it could be a good dark comedy. ?On his past? I just wanna know why, is it childhood, are they ex co workers, ex lovers?

    Good work tho i got it on the first read.

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  2. Posted: July 23, 2018In: Comedy

    When he?s enslaved by aliens, a New York mob boss must rally his fellow prisoners, take over the spaceship and teach his captors; even in space, the mob rules.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on July 25, 2018 at 5:06 pm

    This reads well but needs a bit of polish. After he's abducted by alien gangsters, a 1930's liquor smuggler must rally all the other abductees to break out and get back to Earth.

    This reads well but needs a bit of polish.

    After he’s abducted by alien gangsters, a 1930’s liquor smuggler must rally all the other abductees to break out and get back to Earth.

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2018In: Comedy

    Discovering she was only hired to fill a quota, a family-oriented mother bands with other ?tokens? to prove her unappreciative boss wrong by winning a big contract for the firm.

    yoli Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 25, 2018 at 5:01 am

    Hello I'm new to this group. I like the premise and the log line, but I don't understand why the protagonist in a white woman. When I think of a token in a corporate work, a white woman is probably the last person that comes to mind, unless the company is finance, tech,? science or another? completeRead more

    Hello I’m new to this group. I like the premise and the log line, but I don’t understand why the protagonist in a white woman. When I think of a token in a corporate work, a white woman is probably the last person that comes to mind, unless the company is finance, tech,? science or another? completely male dominated field.? I think your script would work better with a high achieving Black, Latino? or Bi racial woman, maybe there is a white woman who works in another department who plays a role in helping her.
    Just a thought.

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