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  1. Posted: August 3, 2018In: Comedy

    After his future self moves in and starts dating his girlfriend, a once complacent vacuum salesman struggles against fate to prevent the hell he?s living from setting in stone

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    Added an answer on August 5, 2018 at 10:47 pm

    "Figure out how to break the cycle" is the end -- what is the means?? What is the specific action he takes to break the cycle? And so what?? IOW: What's at stake?? What does the present man stand to lose if his future self? succeeds in returning to the past?? Why does the future self want to returnRead more

    “Figure out how to break the cycle” is the end — what is the means?? What is the specific action he takes to break the cycle?

    And so what?? IOW: What’s at stake?? What does the present man stand to lose if his future self? succeeds in returning to the past?? Why does the future self want to return to the past?

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  2. Posted: July 24, 2018In: Comedy

    In an isolated castle the 12th in line to the Earl of Northwattington, a young man attends the late Earl?s will reading but one by one the heirs are being killed. He tries to save them but is undermined by his money hungry fianc

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 26, 2018 at 7:38 am

    Hi Nir Not sure exactly how it ends. It is wordy, I will reword it to drop the word count. Try to stop a series of deaths in a comedy may be a goal. I?ll post a revision.

    Hi Nir

    Not sure exactly how it ends. It is wordy, I will reword it to drop the word count. Try to stop a series of deaths in a comedy may be a goal.

    I?ll post a revision.

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  3. Posted: September 17, 2015In: Comedy

    a terminally ill man sets out to take revenge on people from his past. But to his frustration they are dying before he can get to them.

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    Added an answer on July 26, 2018 at 2:54 am

    This sounds like it could be a good dark comedy. ?On his past? I just wanna know why, is it childhood, are they ex co workers, ex lovers? Good work tho i got it on the first read.

    This sounds like it could be a good dark comedy. ?On his past? I just wanna know why, is it childhood, are they ex co workers, ex lovers?

    Good work tho i got it on the first read.

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