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When he finds himself in the friend zone with the girl of his dreams his senior year of high school, a beta male must climb his way out of this inescapable trap before his Cinderella is stolen from him?.
This is tired old sexist nonsense. Literally billions of people are in the friend zone of any specific female, as that's all the people she's also not dating. I would not watch this. We don't need another one of these. "Climb his way out of this inescapable trap" okay well if it's inescapable then IRead more
This is tired old sexist nonsense. Literally billions of people are in the friend zone of any specific female, as that’s all the people she’s also not dating. I would not watch this. We don’t need another one of these. “Climb his way out of this inescapable trap” okay well if it’s inescapable then I guess I know how the movie ends. “His Cinderella” first of all what is Cinderella-ish about her, second how is she “his” in any way? “Stolen from him” again, she doesn’t belong to him, and do you mean “stolen” like she’ll have the audacity to use her own free will to choose someone to date who is Not Him? *snooze* I don’t care about your main character in the slightest. Think way outside these boxes.
See lessWhen a top assassin falls for her latest target, she must switch from killer to bodyguard to stay alive long enough to turn the tables.
I was unsure how much value I'd get from a review of a logline, but this is great! All really valid and insightful points being made. Thanks everyone. The more I develop the story, the more I veer away from comedy and stray into action with romance. Romaction?!? But comedy, in my humble opinion, isRead more
I was unsure how much value I’d get from a review of a logline, but this is great! All really valid and insightful points being made. Thanks everyone.
The more I develop the story, the more I veer away from comedy and stray into action with romance. Romaction?!? But comedy, in my humble opinion, is spawned from conflict. It is the trichotomy of two well defined characters in a strange situation and how the dynamics play off each other. This story has plenty of that so there’s great scope for comedy, as long as it’s not too dark what with all the killin’!!
dpg – Great points. In my head, and I’ve obviously not put this onto the comments here in depth, is that she switches to keeping him alive not because she falls in love with him by the end of Act 1, but because of why he has a price on his head in the first place. That meshes with her character driving force. She certainly enjoys his company, they get on well with each other, but she doesn’t notice the growing love until the end of Act 2b when she believes him to be dead (spoiler, he’s not!).
See lessA dutiful grandson and his eccentric Greek grandmother begin stealing from the local community in an effort to start their own corrupt chicken farm in their backyard. Things gets a little crazy when people begin to notice their illegal efforts.
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