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A dutiful grandson and his eccentric Greek grandmother begin stealing from the local community in an effort to start their own corrupt chicken farm in their backyard. Things gets a little crazy when people begin to notice their illegal efforts.
I would suggest you study how to write logline, because you have good concept but poor loglines. Click on the link Our Formula to see the ingredient of a good logline.
I would suggest you study how to write logline, because you have good concept but poor loglines.
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When his apartment block is raided by mobsters, an angsty teen discovers that his boring parents were once hit-men of the Yakuza and so he must learn their old ways to defend himself against the violent thugs, who are lead by his estranged Uncle, if he hopes to escape with his life.
I think Nettle's version is an improvement.>>discovers that his boring parents were once hit-men of the YakuzaThat's? backstory, what the protagonist finds out AFTER the inciting incident. But a? logline focuses on the story looking forward, not on the story looking backwards.
I think Nettle’s version is an improvement.
>>discovers that his boring parents were once hit-men of the Yakuza
That’s? backstory, what the protagonist finds out AFTER the inciting incident. But a? logline focuses on the story looking forward, not on the story looking backwards.
See lessWhen a ruthless, undercover alien headhunter discovers, her goofy co-travel-guide-researcher is from the rivaling faction, they must secretly use their genuine budding friendship to outwit the mastermind set on pinning them against each other. (The Alien Guide To Bavaria – to be a youtube show)
What are the stakes?? Why does it matter whether one side or the other wins ?? Win what?? What's the overarching objective goal of the team of non-rivals?
What are the stakes?? Why does it matter whether one side or the other wins ?? Win what?? What’s the overarching objective goal of the team of non-rivals?
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