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  1. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    As for being a janitor, burger flipper or ditch digger..those jobs are for the other people to do. At the age of 28, Charlie Bean comes to the harsh realization that he just might be the other people.

    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 5:57 pm

    How about something like: After failing another job interview, a proud man must put his ego aside and take any job he can to show his pregnant wife he can provide for his family before the birth of his child.

    How about something like:
    After failing another job interview, a proud man must put his ego aside and take any job he can to show his pregnant wife he can provide for his family before the birth of his child.

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2018In: Comedy

    A man having an affair with a married woman discovers his wife is having an affair with her husband.

    etatsecond Logliner
    Added an answer on May 19, 2018 at 10:43 am

    It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist's motivation... what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.

    It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist’s motivation… what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.

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  3. Posted: December 7, 2017In: Comedy

    When a young woman falls in love with a pet shop worker, she must escape her animal cult family.

    etatsecond Logliner
    Added an answer on May 19, 2018 at 8:02 am

    it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don't get it. I think? you should write the protagonist's risk, for example: ... She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped. (sorry for my english,Read more

    it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don’t get it.
    I think? you should write the protagonist’s risk, for example: … She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped.
    (sorry for my english, It is not very good)

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