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A man having an affair with a married woman discovers his wife is having an affair with her husband.
It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist's motivation... what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.
It sound interesting a comedy about that. You have a plot point but not the protagonist’s motivation… what should he do? what must he do? Why did he do that?? You can add an adjective? that answer that, for example; a stressed man or a party man. I hope I helped.
See lessWhen a young woman falls in love with a pet shop worker, she must escape her animal cult family.
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don't get it. I think? you should write the protagonist's risk, for example: ... She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped. (sorry for my english,Read more
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don’t get it.
See lessI think? you should write the protagonist’s risk, for example: … She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped.
(sorry for my english, It is not very good)
when his highschool bully returns, a stuck-in-home-town loser must prove his competence by kicking his ass in the duel he proposed and save his family name
Suggestion:? the inciting incident is the new girl in town whom he falls in love with.? So he has to stand up to the bully -- instead of run away -- if he's going to impress her. "Whatever a man does, he does for his ideal woman." -- George Balanchine fwiw
Suggestion:? the inciting incident is the new girl in town whom he falls in love with.? So he has to stand up to the bully — instead of run away — if he’s going to impress her.
“Whatever a man does, he does for his ideal woman.” — George Balanchine
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