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Three indoctrinated codependent boys flee their orthodox commune determined to reach the launch of the final ship to leave the decaying earth.
Agree with dpg here, confusion exists about the mission to launch, how or why they get to go (are their intentions good or evil?). WHy are they fleeing "their" commune and to where?
Agree with dpg here, confusion exists about the mission to launch, how or why they get to go (are their intentions good or evil?). WHy are they fleeing “their” commune and to where?
See lessWhen her older sister disappears with a mysterious stranger, a loner teen and her newly sober mother embark on a precarious road trip to find her.
Agreed with a lot of the above. I'll add that it's unclear what their major obstacles are going to be. In other words, two people on a road trip is rather mundane and uneventful, could you give them a ticking time bomb or put them under more pressure? What if the mom or older sister had a conditionRead more
Agreed with a lot of the above.
I’ll add that it’s unclear what their major obstacles are going to be. In other words, two people on a road trip is rather mundane and uneventful, could you give them a ticking time bomb or put them under more pressure? What if the mom or older sister had a condition that needed treatment or if they must do battle with a few dangerous associates of the mysterious stranger.
See lessWhen a strange new man enters his irresponsible mother’s life, and his father returns from rehab, a teenage boy’s life is rocked to its core as he deals with a traumatic and violent event in his past and coming to terms with his complicated sexuality.
Agreed with DPG and Richiev. Also, as a rule of thumb, best to avoid non descriptive terminology such as; "...life is rocked to its core..." and "...coming to terms with...". These kind of descriptions don't mean much in terms of plot specific events, it's far better to use clearly defined characterRead more
Agreed with DPG and Richiev.
Also, as a rule of thumb, best to avoid non descriptive terminology such as; “…life is rocked to its core…” and “…coming to terms with…”. These kind of descriptions don’t mean much in terms of plot specific events, it’s far better to use clearly defined characters and events to describe the details of a plot.
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