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Two recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.
People don?t usually go a long journey to disprove something they believe in. It ain?t natural as they say. They would simply live in denial until someone or something made them see things differently. That was exactly my issue with what I wrote.To clarify, are you suggesting the boys venture to proRead more
People don?t usually go a long journey to disprove something they believe in. It ain?t natural as they say. They would simply live in denial until someone or something made them see things differently.
That was exactly my issue with what I wrote.
To clarify, are you suggesting the boys venture to prove the landing is a hoax, but perhaps the ‘twist’ is that it turns out to be real? Something along the lines of:
When an alien vessel arrives on Earth, two devout boy’s race to disprove the landing as a hoax, only to discover their orthodox worldview may not be as accurate as they believed.
See lessThree indoctrinated codependent boys flee their orthodox commune determined to reach the launch of the final ship to leave the decaying earth.
Agree with dpg here, confusion exists about the mission to launch, how or why they get to go (are their intentions good or evil?). WHy are they fleeing "their" commune and to where?
Agree with dpg here, confusion exists about the mission to launch, how or why they get to go (are their intentions good or evil?). WHy are they fleeing “their” commune and to where?
See lessWhen her older sister disappears with a mysterious stranger, a loner teen and her newly sober mother embark on a precarious road trip to find her.
Agreed with a lot of the above. I'll add that it's unclear what their major obstacles are going to be. In other words, two people on a road trip is rather mundane and uneventful, could you give them a ticking time bomb or put them under more pressure? What if the mom or older sister had a conditionRead more
Agreed with a lot of the above.
I’ll add that it’s unclear what their major obstacles are going to be. In other words, two people on a road trip is rather mundane and uneventful, could you give them a ticking time bomb or put them under more pressure? What if the mom or older sister had a condition that needed treatment or if they must do battle with a few dangerous associates of the mysterious stranger.
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