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A wide eyed bullied suburban housewife who walks into the robbery homicide of a loan shark must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
I like, but I'm distracted by wide eyed bullied. Maybe: An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
I like, but I’m distracted by wide eyed bullied.
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An innocent suburban housewife walks in on the robbery homicide of a loan shark and now must evade being hunted by both sides of the law to protect her family.
A grieving father takes a job as a janitor to break into a building and gatecrash a Christmas party to exact revenge on those who committed an unspeakable act against his son.
This logline had me HOOKED until you said "unspeakable act". The unspeakable act is directly spoken of when you say, "unspeakable act". However, changing unspeakable out for a different adjective fixes this problem immediately and leaves you with a very very well polished logline that sells. "HeinouRead more
This logline had me HOOKED until you said “unspeakable act”. The unspeakable act is directly spoken of when you say, “unspeakable act”. However, changing unspeakable out for a different adjective fixes this problem immediately and leaves you with a very very well polished logline that sells. “Heinous” “unforgivable” “destructive.” Maybe I am ridiculous, but to me (and my opinion is but a grain of salt) unspeakable loses me because it could be anything, when what I want is simplicity and a logline that is upfront.
WONDERFUL LOGLINE!!!
See lessWhen a spate of violent unsolved crime spirals out of control, a green FBI agent must accept his Spanish cultural roots and go undercover in order to uncover and bring to justice cops on the different side of the same badge before the city is ripped apart.
When a restrained and reserved young FBI agent finds himself leading an investigation into a spate of violent, unsolved crimes spiraling out of control, he must unify the team, or risk demotion. But when it's revealed that high ranking members of the Spanish police maybe behind the city's chaos, heRead more
When a restrained and reserved young FBI agent finds himself leading an investigation into a spate of violent, unsolved crimes spiraling out of control, he must unify the team, or risk demotion.
But when it’s revealed that high ranking members of the Spanish police maybe behind the city’s chaos, he must go undercover to bring about justice before his hometown is ripped apart.
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