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A washed up journalist desperate to rekindle his career, forced to take an anniversary piece in a sleepy town must hack through deadly social terrain when he discovers the town harbors dark secrets they want, and anyone who tries to expose them, buried.
Great premise, although from the way it’s worded, it reads more like a horror film in my opinion. That being said, I made a couple of tweaks just to help make it a bit more concise. Feel free to use what you like and discard what you don’t 🙂 A washed up journalist takes on an anniversary piece onlyRead more
Great premise, although from the way it’s worded, it reads more like a horror film in my opinion.
That being said, I made a couple of tweaks just to help make it a bit more concise. Feel free to use what you like and discard what you don’t 🙂
A washed up journalist takes on an anniversary piece only to discover that it harbors dark secrets in a town where anyone who digs too deep meets a sinister end.
This keeps the essence of what you were trying to say while also improving the clarity a bit. For me personally, I also try to keep loglines at 30 words or less.
See lessA gripping tale of family secrets, betrayal, and unbreakable bonds, Detective Carin Trimble is on a quest to untangle a web hints left by her late mother.
I mean it has me intrigued, but without more information how is this different to any other detective story? What are the family secrets? What is in the web of hints? Loglines are used to inform people on the entire plot in as few words as possible. Although the genre is mystery, the logline shouldRead more
I mean it has me intrigued, but without more information how is this different to any other detective story? What are the family secrets? What is in the web of hints? Loglines are used to inform people on the entire plot in as few words as possible. Although the genre is mystery, the logline should not create mystery.
See lessWhen his murderous creditors granddaughter goes missing, in electric, neon drenched Tokyo, burn out, failed private investigator Joe Horiuchi is given a week to find her to pay off a large gambling debt, and discovers deep seated corruption of politicians tied to human trafficking and the organized crime gangs running them; but when the officer helping Joe wants to arrest him, he must rediscover his purpose in life and earn the trust back of those he cares about in order to venture further down the dark rabbit hole of organized crime to unearth the source of corruption before he gets his arm cut off.
Intriguing story! I’d watch’s series about organized crime in Japan. For a logline, see if you can capture the key ingredients (main character, catalyst, their challenge) in fewer words. Hit me with just the essence of your story - and quickly - and leave out the rest, to make me want to watch it toRead more
Intriguing story! I’d watch’s series about organized crime in Japan.
For a logline, see if you can capture the key ingredients (main character, catalyst, their challenge) in fewer words. Hit me with just the essence of your story – and quickly – and leave out the rest, to make me want to watch it to find out what happens.
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