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After a shootout results in the death of a rookie, a decorated patrolman is blamed and exiled to the dreaded midnight shift for six months to prove he still belongs on the force. But his chance at redemption slowly unravels when a bitter veteran-once a close ally, begins to suspect the ‘real’ truth behind the rookies murder and threatens to expose it- forcing the patrolman to take desperate measures to salvage his career.
What the logline needs is more clarity and specificity. What is the (inciting) incident that gives the cop a chance to redeem himself? And what is the concrete, specific action he takes to remove the blemish on his record?
What the logline needs is more clarity and specificity. What is the (inciting) incident that gives the cop a chance to redeem himself? And what is the concrete, specific action he takes to remove the blemish on his record?
See lessA washed up journalist desperate to rekindle his career, forced to take an anniversary piece in a sleepy town must hack through deadly social terrain when he discovers the town harbors dark secrets they want, and anyone who tries to expose them, buried.
Great premise, although from the way it’s worded, it reads more like a horror film in my opinion. That being said, I made a couple of tweaks just to help make it a bit more concise. Feel free to use what you like and discard what you don’t 🙂 A washed up journalist takes on an anniversary piece onlyRead more
Great premise, although from the way it’s worded, it reads more like a horror film in my opinion.
That being said, I made a couple of tweaks just to help make it a bit more concise. Feel free to use what you like and discard what you don’t 🙂
A washed up journalist takes on an anniversary piece only to discover that it harbors dark secrets in a town where anyone who digs too deep meets a sinister end.
This keeps the essence of what you were trying to say while also improving the clarity a bit. For me personally, I also try to keep loglines at 30 words or less.
See lessA gripping tale of family secrets, betrayal, and unbreakable bonds, Detective Carin Trimble is on a quest to untangle a web hints left by her late mother.
I mean it has me intrigued, but without more information how is this different to any other detective story? What are the family secrets? What is in the web of hints? Loglines are used to inform people on the entire plot in as few words as possible. Although the genre is mystery, the logline shouldRead more
I mean it has me intrigued, but without more information how is this different to any other detective story? What are the family secrets? What is in the web of hints? Loglines are used to inform people on the entire plot in as few words as possible. Although the genre is mystery, the logline should not create mystery.
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