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  1. Posted: January 4, 2024In: Crime

    After uncovering a grisly homicide near her newly assigned rural workplace a demoted city detective must play a game of cat and mouse with colleagues to reclaim her old job while covertly fighting to attain justice for her daughter.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on January 6, 2024 at 5:46 am

    Leaning towards: When reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.

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    When reassigned to a small town leads to murder, a demoted detective fights to reclaim her position and justice for her slain daughter.

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  2. Posted: December 27, 2023In: Crime

    A demoted police detective fights to find justice for her daughter after witnessing a grisly homicide that occurs near her newly assigned workplace.

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    Added an answer on December 28, 2023 at 2:18 pm

    Right now I'm confused. Does the grisly homicide have something to do with her daughter? It's unclear. Also, if a police detective witnesses a homicide, they would start investigating it, wouldn't they Do they do that? Or do they go on a separate quest to find justice for their daughter? I'm also woRead more

    Right now I’m confused. Does the grisly homicide have something to do with her daughter? It’s unclear. Also, if a police detective witnesses a homicide, they would start investigating it, wouldn’t they Do they do that? Or do they go on a separate quest to find justice for their daughter? I’m also wondering how the issue of their being ‘demoted’ connects to the other elements… that suggests a professional redemption arc, rather than anything to do with their daughter.

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2023In: Crime

    A family member is involved in an accident, but it is covered up. A few years later, the man who now runs an escort club is again involved in a mysterious incident.

    Karel Segers Samurai
    Added an answer on September 22, 2023 at 8:41 am

    May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events. Read the sections labeled "Formula" and "Examples", then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews. Good luck!

    May I suggest you read the training materials on this site? This is not a story concept as it merely lists two events.

    Read the sections labeled “Formula” and “Examples”, then read some example loglines here on the site and learn from the reviews.

    Good luck!

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