This a logline for a seven episode TV series, including the pilot. Not finished so if anyone can help with it I would greatly appreciate it!
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When his murderous creditors granddaughter goes missing, in electric, neon drenched Tokyo, burn out, failed private investigator Joe Horiuchi is given a week to find her to pay off a large gambling debt, and discovers deep seated corruption of politicians tied to human trafficking and the organized crime gangs running them; but when the officer helping Joe wants to arrest him, he must rediscover his purpose in life and earn the trust back of those he cares about in order to venture further down the dark rabbit hole of organized crime to unearth the source of corruption before he gets his arm cut off.
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Intriguing story! I’d watch’s series about organized crime in Japan.
For a logline, see if you can capture the key ingredients (main character, catalyst, their challenge) in fewer words. Hit me with just the essence of your story – and quickly – and leave out the rest, to make me want to watch it to find out what happens.
Thank you Brian, I agree it’s a little bloated and maybe needs a series main antagonist as well, I’ll get on to it!