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mobiuswestPenpusher
Posted: November 19, 20242024-11-19T17:24:09+10:00 2024-11-19T17:24:09+10:00In: Crime

A washed up journalist desperate to rekindle his career, forced to take an anniversary piece in a sleepy town must hack through deadly social terrain when he discovers the town harbors dark secrets they want, and anyone who tries to expose them, buried.

A washed up journalist desperate to rekindle his career, forced to take an anniversary piece in a sleepy town must hack through deadly social terrain when he discovers the town harbors dark secrets they want, and anyone who tries to expose them, buried.
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      Nick12 Penpusher
      2024-11-26T19:45:21+10:00Added an answer on November 26, 2024 at 7:45 pm

      Great premise, although from the way it’s worded, it reads more like a horror film in my opinion.

      That being said, I made a couple of tweaks just to help make it a bit more concise. Feel free to use what you like and discard what you don’t 🙂

      A washed up journalist takes on an anniversary piece only to discover that it harbors dark secrets in a town where anyone who digs too deep meets a sinister end.

      This keeps the essence of what you were trying to say while also improving the clarity a bit. For me personally, I also try to keep loglines at 30 words or less.

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      • mobiuswest Penpusher
        2024-12-03T12:02:18+10:00Replied to answer on December 3, 2024 at 12:02 pm

        Thank you sir, this is great!

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