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  1. Posted: April 10, 2018In: Crime

    After a rape victim loses in court from the suspect?s influential family, she emerges as the leader of “broken”, a group of similar cases prepared to bring justice by necessary evil

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on April 11, 2018 at 6:39 pm

    If this is a film, I suggest you specify her taking the law into her own hands with a view to punishing her attacker and her attacker only. Otherwise, you're setting up a situation that never ends which makes this better suited as a series instead. She's the Dexter of rapes, and I think her story woRead more

    If this is a film, I suggest you specify her taking the law into her own hands with a view to punishing her attacker and her attacker only. Otherwise, you’re setting up a situation that never ends which makes this better suited as a series instead.

    She’s the Dexter of rapes, and I think her story would make for a great film if she goes after her own rapist and her own rapist only, otherwise, you’ll have a massive can of worms on your hands. Richiev’s rewrite suggestion works well, it cleans up some of the wording and redundancies.

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  2. Posted: April 7, 2018In: Crime

    When an innocent prisoner becomes a criminal on his failed attempt to break out of jail, it’s upto his freed partner-in-crime to prove his innocence and take false blame during their jail break

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 8:59 am

    As Richiev said.It's difficult for me to sort out what the story is really about.? The fact that both of them start out in jail means they are at least accused of being guilty of some crime -- otherwise why would they be in jail?

    As Richiev said.

    It’s difficult for me to sort out what the story is really about.? The fact that both of them start out in jail means they are at least accused of being guilty of some crime — otherwise why would they be in jail?

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2018In: Crime

    In his case vs the state, when a broke criminal lawyer realises he’s infact defending a criminal, he faces an ethical fight

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    Added an answer on April 7, 2018 at 6:49 am

    If he's a criminal lawyer, then he's likely to have faced up with the fact that he will defend criminals. It's drilled into every lawyer that this will be the case and very rarely if ever would a lawyer be surprised about it.

    If he’s a criminal lawyer, then he’s likely to have faced up with the fact that he will defend criminals.
    It’s drilled into every lawyer that this will be the case and very rarely if ever would a lawyer be surprised about it.

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