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A young reporter and her Olympian interview subject clash when she digs into his past to reinvestigate the notorious murder she believes his father was wrongly convicted for ? a murder for which he pled guilty.
Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it's pretty clear I'm not getting the core of my story across at all.?I'll be reworking what I have!
Thanks for your feedback! Based on your comments, it’s pretty clear I’m not getting the core of my story across at all.?I’ll be reworking what I have!
See lessWhen a high school kid suspects his father is responsible for a series of grisly prostitute murders, he teams up with a plucky young call girl to positively identify and stop the murderer.
A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.Seems better, what do you think?
A high school age boy comes to suspects his father is responsible for a recent series of grisly prostitute killings. Together with a plucky young call girl, he?teams up working to find the truth and stop further killings.
Seems better, what do you think?
See lessWhen a manic-depressive sharpshooter?s mother is assassinated, he marauds a criminal empire for the elusive hit-man responsible.
As Dkpough1 said. ?Bipolar has replaced manic-depressive in psycho-lingo.?I have a concern about the wording, that the character is defined in an adjective phrase, rather than as part of subject of the sentence. ?So instead of?"When a bipolar sharpshooter's mother is assassinated, he..." ?I suggestRead more
As Dkpough1 said. ?Bipolar has replaced manic-depressive in psycho-lingo.
?I have a concern about the wording, that the character is defined in an adjective phrase, rather than as part of subject of the sentence. ?So instead of?”When a bipolar sharpshooter’s mother is assassinated, he…” ?I suggest “When his mother is assassinated, a bipolar sharpshooter….”
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