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  1. Posted: May 3, 2022In: Crime

    When a stranger from his criminal past visits his support group, an ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life by reawakening old demons.

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    Added an answer on July 20, 2022 at 3:57 pm

    Hi The_CNI, May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger? The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m? What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest? I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or meRead more

    Hi The_CNI,
    May I ask who is your lead character? The priest? The stranger?
    The ex-sicario priest must protect the people in his new life from who/m?
    What is the relation of the support group with the ex-sicario priest?
    I propose you write your logline in simple words (without using any idioms or metaphors) first. Then share it here so we can figure out the abstract concept. Then you will probably get more feedback.

    I hope this helps

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  2. Posted: May 23, 2022In: Crime

    With the death of his father, Leon Walsh is suddenly the new leader of his families smuggling business. But with a Cartel closing in and his five siblings wanting out, Leon must decide if a war with his competitors is something his family can survive.

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    Added an answer on July 9, 2022 at 3:41 pm

    Hi ThoorMoreno, Have I understood the concept correctly? A man must decide whether his business can survive a war with a ruthless cartel after he inherits his family's smuggling business that his sibling wants no part in. I hope this helps.

    Hi ThoorMoreno,
    Have I understood the concept correctly?

    A man must decide whether his business can survive a war with a ruthless cartel after he inherits his family’s smuggling business that his sibling wants no part in.

    I hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: June 24, 2022In: Crime

    When the mob murders his friend, the cops say it’s a random killing. An Army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge his friend.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2022 at 3:50 pm

    Hello opqlife, I guess it can be something like this? When the mob murders his friend, an army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge despite cops considering the crime as a random homicide. I hope this helps.

    Hello opqlife,
    I guess it can be something like this?

    When the mob murders his friend, an army vet sets out to find the truth and avenge despite cops considering the crime as a random homicide.

    I hope this helps.

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