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A homeless man combating substance abuse dedicates his battle with HIV to his brother who allegedly died in the Iraq war. His efforts are guided and nourished by the unrivaled generosity of a female passerby who seeks to help him out from week to week — but as time grows and grows, so does his reliance on her.
How about: After the death of his brother, a homeless man fights against his own substance abuse and failing health before it's too late.
How about:
After the death of his brother, a homeless man fights against his own substance abuse and failing health before it’s too late.
See lessA British Gangster who is dying flies to the States, with his gang?s money, to see the old West in search of a perfect end to his once violent career.
If, as Richiev suggests, he wants to go out with an old fashioned Western shootout, the logline needs to say so.? Like:A British Gangster dying of cancer seeks the perfect end to his violent career: a shootout at the O.K. Corral in Tombstone, Arizona.
If, as Richiev suggests, he wants to go out with an old fashioned Western shootout, the logline needs to say so.? Like:
A British Gangster dying of cancer seeks the perfect end to his violent career: a shootout at the O.K. Corral in Tombstone, Arizona.
See lessWhen the megalomaniac magnate of a memory-erasing mafia refuses to name any of his bellicose triplets as successor, they race against each other to expose the memories he erased before the mafia erases theirs.
Thank you all for your super-helpful feedback! I've posted a second logline as a revision of the first, titled (2nd revision), which I hope meets all of your suggestions and feedback - or at least improves upon this one here. Thank you all again.
Thank you all for your super-helpful feedback! I’ve posted a second logline as a revision of the first, titled (2nd revision), which I hope meets all of your suggestions and feedback – or at least improves upon this one here. Thank you all again.
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