1. Posted: September 17, 2022In:

    After a road accident, a young malcontent finds himself legally bound to the whims of a narcissistic billionaire who aims to break him as a person.

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    Hi Hallucigenia, How about this? "A rebellious young man finds himself legally bound to the whims of an egoistic billionaire who is out to make a point of breaking him." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi Hallucigenia,

    How about this?

    “A rebellious young man finds himself legally bound to the whims of an egoistic billionaire who is out to make a point of breaking him.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2022In:

    When a closeted, conservative television host meets and falls for another woman, she must decide whether to give up the empire she’s built or risk rejection and persecution to be with the woman she loves.

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    Hi grbrinkley, Here's what I understood reading your proposed logline: "A popular TV hostess falls in love with another woman and must decide whether to ignore her feelings and maintain her fame or come out of the closet and face possible rejection and persecution." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi grbrinkley,

    Here’s what I understood reading your proposed logline:

    “A popular TV hostess falls in love with another woman and must decide whether to ignore her feelings and maintain her fame or come out of the closet and face possible rejection and persecution.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2022In:

    When the boss of a nightclub fires a broke pregnant DJ, the DJ needs to make the most extraordinary show of her career in order to keep her job

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    Hi oscareklund, This is how I see it so far. Anything else you want to ad? "To keep her job, a pregnant DJ must perform the most extraordinary show of her career." I hope this helps Good Luck

    Hi oscareklund,

    This is how I see it so far. Anything else you want to ad?

    “To keep her job, a pregnant DJ must perform the most extraordinary show of her career.”

    I hope this helps

    Good Luck

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