1. Posted: May 22, 2022In:

    When a headstrong 20-year-old joins a dangerous separatist group, his father, an SFPD cop, must go to a remote Pacific island to rescue him so they can rebuild their failed relationship.

    Niksa Penpusher

    Not a bad plot idea.

    Not a bad plot idea.

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2022In:

    A doubtful artist and a stagnant fashion designer confront their own shortcomings when that spark an unlikely friendship

    Alan H. Jordan Penpusher

    There doesn't seem to be much much conflict here. Two insecure people met and strike up a friendship.So what? What are they seeking? What do they have to lose? If I know these things, maybe I'll care.

    There doesn’t seem to be much much conflict here. Two insecure people met and strike up a friendship.So what? What are they seeking? What do they have to lose? If I know these things, maybe I’ll care.

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  3. Posted: June 15, 2022In:

    When a jaded young woman goes missing on a work trip, three colleagues – her queer best friend, an alpha male and an average Joe – discover that she has fled to a secret civilisation inhabited only by women, where they all stay for a while.

    BenGilani Logliner

    When a jaded young woman disappears while on a business trip, three avid colleagues find out she has fled to a women-inhabited secret community and decide to keep her company for a while. I hope this helps.

    When a jaded young woman disappears while on a business trip, three avid colleagues find out she has fled to a women-inhabited secret community and decide to keep her company for a while.

    I hope this helps.

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