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When a man is on the verge of suicide, he receives a video tape of his younger self, convincing him to follow his dreams.
Hi Brayden, I guess this can be something like this? A suicidal man receives a tape containing footage of himself that persuades him to follow his dreams instead of ending his life. I hope this helps. Ben
Hi Brayden,
I guess this can be something like this?
A suicidal man receives a tape containing footage of himself that persuades him to follow his dreams instead of ending his life.
I hope this helps.
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When a random YouTube sermon triggered guilty conscience in her, a primary school teacher must search for her elderly couple victims to confess her actions.
Logline is a touch long-winded and I think there are some missed opportunities. I feel like a random youtube sermon doesn't quite have the intrigue of just a regular sermon in a church (assuming it's religious). It's more visually stimulating and offers more insight into this character that you coulRead more
Logline is a touch long-winded and I think there are some missed opportunities.
I feel like a random youtube sermon doesn’t quite have the intrigue of just a regular sermon in a church (assuming it’s religious). It’s more visually stimulating and offers more insight into this character that you could delve into.
Maybe something along the lines of:
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After having broken up with her partner, a woman overhears a young couple that is falling apart and attempts to save their relationship.
Feel like you could really streamline this logline through better structure and just tightening up certain sentences a little bit. When a heartbroken woman overhears a young couple's bitter argument, she must attempt to reconcile their relationship. 17 words as opposed to your 23. Could now look intRead more
Feel like you could really streamline this logline through better structure and just tightening up certain sentences a little bit.
When a heartbroken woman overhears a young couple’s bitter argument, she must attempt to reconcile their relationship.
17 words as opposed to your 23. Could now look into the real reason she wants to do this, is it to restore her faith in love, to tackle her own heartache and gain catharsis?
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