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A crotchety old man goes to no end to get into Mexico with eight hundred thousand dollars in stolen money. He is faced with outwitting A deranged killer, Law enforcement, and a con woman.
Leaning towards: “A crotchety old thief must outwit a deranged killer, a rogue cop, and a con woman in order to escape to Mexico with 800,000 dollars” I took some liberties with your nebulous “law enforcement” — you get the idea. Consider a holy grail amount of stolen money to up the stakes. Make thRead more
Leaning towards:
“A crotchety old thief must outwit a deranged killer, a rogue cop, and a con woman in order to escape to Mexico with 800,000 dollars”
I took some liberties with your nebulous “law enforcement” — you get the idea.
Consider a holy grail amount of stolen money to up the stakes.
Make this yours, keep going!
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Sounds great. I see it like Rocky 5, where he doesn't wanna fight and it ends up a street brawl.
Sounds great. I see it like Rocky 5, where he doesn’t wanna fight and it ends up a street brawl.
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Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after "unless she finds the strength" I also think wording like "she must" would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbRead more
Good concept and your logline hits the necessary beats, but imo the sentence is just a little bit hard to read. I would consider rewording and/or cleaning up everything after “unless she finds the strength”
See lessI also think wording like “she must” would be a little clearer and eliminate unnecessary verbage.