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  1. Posted: February 17, 2020In: Drama

    After a empath singer offers to be a surrogate to her long time best friend, who struggles to conceive. She must overcome her guilt when she is told she could not conceive a child of her own due to her actions, and find the ability to accept her boyfriend’s desire to marry her, or lose him forever.

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    Added an answer on February 18, 2020 at 6:18 am

    Keymiser:Transgender must be in the logline.? Must, MUST, MUST.? It's your differentiating story hook.And I suggest using the more common term "empathetic" in the logline.? Spell it out.That said, in the script,? definitely develop how her intense awareness of others' feeling plays out as both a chaRead more

    Keymiser:

    Transgender must be in the logline.? Must, MUST, MUST.? It’s your differentiating story hook.

    And I suggest using the more common term “empathetic” in the logline.? Spell it out.

    That said, in the script,? definitely develop how her intense awareness of others’ feeling plays out as both a character strength and a character weakness.? For example, a critic of her decision, someone who knows her all too well (like her mother) could point out she’s always been an easy mark, a sucker for a hard luck story.

    And she will also be acutely aware of the negative feelings of her boyfriend.? So emotionally she’s caught in a cross-fire, trapped between the horns of a dilemma, damned if she does,? damned if she doesn’t.

    Whatever.? My takeaway is that I sense there’s dramatic gold to? be mined in her intense empathy.? (Are you aware of the Myers-Briggs typology? Your character would score at the far end of the feeling spectrum).

    Best wishes with your project.

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  2. Posted: February 15, 2020In: Drama

    A woman from the Rust Belt strives for fame and glory by entering the Chicago marathon, but after she unexpectedly gets pregnant is faced with a tragic decision.

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    Added an answer on February 16, 2020 at 3:01 am

    As Keymiser asked.? What's so tragic about being pregnant?? Yes, it is an inconvenience, a complication to her marathon ambitions.? But how is it the inciting incident to a tragedy?

    As Keymiser asked.? What’s so tragic about being pregnant?? Yes, it is an inconvenience, a complication to her marathon ambitions.? But how is it the inciting incident to a tragedy?

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2020In: Drama

    When a sacred family heirloom goes missing, a devoted widow is stalked by a deranged young woman who believes that she took the emblem and she viciously sets out to retrieve what might be rightfully hers.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2020 at 9:46 am

    Agreed with the above.   Also, the stakes seem rather low. Could there be more to the heirloom? Maybe it has more than just sentimental value? Related to life saving research etc...

    Agreed with the above.

     

    Also, the stakes seem rather low. Could there be more to the heirloom? Maybe it has more than just sentimental value? Related to life saving research etc…

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