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A screen-obsessed 11-year-old gets trapped inside the dusty book left to him by his Grandfather where he must learn to visualise the fairytale world around him, play through the story, and imagine his way to the very last page.
Who/what is the primary antagonist/obstacle in the story world that must be overcome? Suggestion: Amp up the conflict with dual protagonists. A boy and girl must work together to get to the last page of the book -- and freedom. But they have diametrically different visions of how to proceed at everyRead more
Who/what is the primary antagonist/obstacle in the story world that must be overcome?
Suggestion: Amp up the conflict with dual protagonists. A boy and girl must work together to get to the last page of the book — and freedom. But they have diametrically different visions of how to proceed at every plot point. They argue over everything.
Working title : Write of Passage.
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See lessA sea otter living on Vancouver Island’s coast fears the ocean, but he hopes to overcome his fears from the help of friendly land creatures.
Rather than "hopes" -- the seat otter MUST overcome his fears. Or else . Or else what? What are the stakes. What does he stand to gain by overcoming his fear? What will he (and others) lose if he fails? What is his m.o. (action line) for overcoming his fear?
Rather than “hopes” — the seat otter MUST overcome his fears. Or else .
Or else what? What are the stakes. What does he stand to gain by overcoming his fear? What will he (and others) lose if he fails?
What is his m.o. (action line) for overcoming his fear?
See lessWhen a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.
Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. "When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.
Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. “When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.
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