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  1. Posted: December 30, 2019In: Family

    When a teenager discovers her identical twin, she convinces her to swap lives so she may discover the whereabouts of their missing father.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on December 30, 2019 at 11:28 am

    I think the concept interesting, but why can't the first twin hunt for her father without switching places? That obstacle is probably important to the logline

    I think the concept interesting, but why can’t the first twin hunt for her father without switching places? That obstacle is probably important to the logline

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  2. Posted: November 28, 2019In: Family

    When Christmas HQ is to be torn down due to a lack of belief, a diffident new Santa rallies the other Santas to get children believing again, but when nothing raises the belief-ometer he must find the real cause before Christmas morning.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on December 1, 2019 at 10:57 am

    Richiev's version is simple and works well. A question that comes to mind is why did children stop believing in the first place? In other words, it would be great to include a unique antagonist in the logline. It could be a pop culture icon that's captured the youth's imagination, an addictive sociaRead more

    Richiev’s version is simple and works well.

    A question that comes to mind is why did children stop believing in the first place?

    In other words, it would be great to include a unique antagonist in the logline. It could be a pop culture icon that’s captured the youth’s imagination, an addictive social media platform or a video game manufacturer.

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  3. Posted: November 19, 2019In: Family

    When the family restaurant is going under, a klutzy teenager accidentally creates a secret menu based on her cooking mishaps, and must keep up with the charade to help save the restaurant.

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on November 19, 2019 at 5:01 pm

    Agreed with the others, perhaps she discovers one great dish that no one thought of - the next big culinary hit. However, when asked to expand on the recipe and put together a whole menu, she's stumped and not sure how to do it.

    Agreed with the others, perhaps she discovers one great dish that no one thought of – the next big culinary hit. However, when asked to expand on the recipe and put together a whole menu, she’s stumped and not sure how to do it.

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