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After a stern Yardmaster contracts a deadly virus from a baboon sneeze, a spirited young girl must set out across town to retrieve a last rare remedy before her father’s illness worsens.
Hi RailGamm97, Here's how I see it: "To help her father fight a deadly virus he contracted from a wild animal, a courageous young girl must set out across town to retrieve the last rare remedy." I hope this helps Good Luck Ben
Hi RailGamm97,
Here’s how I see it:
“To help her father fight a deadly virus he contracted from a wild animal, a courageous young girl must set out across town to retrieve the last rare remedy.”
I hope this helps
Good Luck
Ben
See lessAn African American lawyer takes in three of his kids after their mother passed away, but they soon discovered that he’s engaged with a Caucasian woman who has three kids of her own.
Interesting start, but what’s the conflict here? What does the protagonist want and who is trying to prevent him from getting it? Make it more explicit.
Interesting start, but what’s the conflict here? What does the protagonist want and who is trying to prevent him from getting it? Make it more explicit.
See lessBRIGHT ORANGE BALL – POV Ball. After one of the best soccer players in the world passes over his first soccer ball must convince the legend’s grandson to take up soccer.
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded - what are the stakes? For logline structure reseRead more
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded – what are the stakes?
For logline structure research, lookup movies like The Brave Little Toaster. That bright orange ball is your hook, and I can envision a bridge to becoming something better for both the ball and the player. Keep going! I hope you find this constructive.
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