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His dad died when he was just 9. This Jamaican boy must now fight to survive in the Reggae-thumping streets of Jamaica, learning diplomacy for ultimately dealing with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony. ðŸ¤The movie starts with an incident where this boy at 18, approaches a notorious ganster’s girlfriend on a Reggae dance floor. A fight ensued after this boy broke a bottle over the gangster’s head……(Intiguinge)…
Hi Alrington, I don't understand. Are you saying "This Jamaican boy must learn diplomacy to ultimately deal with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony? What are you trying to say exactly? 1- This Boy has 8 children 2- This Boy has been married 5 times? 3- This Boy is Jamaican. 4- This Boy hRead more
Hi Alrington,
See lessI don’t understand. Are you saying “This Jamaican boy must learn diplomacy to ultimately deal with his 8 children and their 5 mothers, in harmony?
What are you trying to say exactly?
1- This Boy has 8 children
2- This Boy has been married 5 times?
3- This Boy is Jamaican.
4- This Boy has a fight in a bar with……
5- Intiguinge? (Do you mean to say Intriguing? Inspiring?
A megalomaniac businessmann plots to overthrow the king, but only an abused poor blind orphaned boy can stop him
Dear Benneth, Reading your synopsis, I am convinced that the "abused poor blind orphaned boy" is the lead character. If so, you need something like this: An ill-fated blind boy and his fairy guardian must help break the curse that is spelled by an egoistic businessman who plots to overthrow the kingRead more
Dear Benneth,
Reading your synopsis, I am convinced that the “abused poor blind orphaned boy” is the lead character. If so, you need something like this:
An ill-fated blind boy and his fairy guardian must help break the curse that is spelled by an egoistic businessman who plots to overthrow the kingdom and become a king.
I hope this helps.
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Twin sisters separated at birth and raised by their parents in different social strata meet again and respond to the great contradictions of their lives. Can your environment change who you are?
Hi colibricubano, To me, this sounds more like an unedited version of a movie tag than a logline. I suggest you finalize your lead character first, then the major event, and finally the action. You can introduce a Stake. Follow the formula below and re-write your logline. the CHARACTER/POV: describeRead more
Hi colibricubano,
To me, this sounds more like an unedited version of a movie tag than a logline. I suggest you finalize your lead character first, then the major event, and finally the action. You can introduce a Stake. Follow the formula below and re-write your logline.
the CHARACTER/POV: describe sociology/function and psychology/behaviour.
the MAJOR EVENT: this is the inciting incident, the call to adventure, catalyst etc.
the ACTION/GOAL: describe what the MC tries to achieve for most of the story.
Optional inclusions
the STAKES: for high concept stories, the stakes are implied in the basic logline
the OBSTACLE/ANTAGONIST: often part of the Action, or suggested by the Event
the HERO’S FLAW: this will express the theme and character journey/transformation.
I hope this helps.
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