1. Posted: December 31, 2017In:

    Man who used to be a woman gives birth to a baby by woman who used to be a man.

    Valentin Samurai

    That is not a Logline, that is just an event that happen last year, ?when two transgender people had a child together.

    That is not a Logline, that is just an event that happen last year, ?when two transgender people had a child together.

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  2. Posted: January 27, 2018In:

    When his hive is attacked by landscapers, a nerdy ant must work with an arrogant wasp, a sly cockroach and a vicious spider to create a 6ft tall mech to take on the human mecace and prove himself to the Ant Queen.

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    I think all the plot-critical elements are in the logline, it just needs a bit of editing. I'd also give the menace a specific face instead of making it a group of people. How about: After a gardner threatens to destroy the patch of forest he lives in, a nerdy ant must work with other insects to buiRead more

    I think all the plot-critical elements are in the logline, it just needs a bit of editing. I’d also give the menace a specific face instead of making it a group of people.

    How about:
    After a gardner threatens to destroy the patch of forest he lives in, a nerdy ant must work with other insects to build a 6ft tall robot to fend off the human menace and save their colonies.

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  3. Posted: January 7, 2018In:

    After his father’s second marriage, a teenage boy learns to navigate his new life, only to discover his stepmom’s a narcissist..

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    dpg Singularity

    I would like to follow up my previous post. I think the concept of a narcissistic step-mother would provide the raw ore for a comedy, more so than for a drama.? But the ore needs refining.??A logline describes a? plot.? And a plot is? a story framed from the point of view of the protagonist.? In thiRead more

    I would like to follow up my previous post. I think the concept of a narcissistic step-mother would provide the raw ore for a comedy, more so than for a drama.? But the ore needs refining.?

    ?A logline describes a? plot.? And a plot is? a story framed from the point of view of the protagonist.? In this case, that’s the boy.? So? what is the specific complication that an “all about me” step mom creates in a story that is nominally “all about him”.? What Big Dream of his is threatened by her personality disorder?

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