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  1. Posted: May 29, 2017In: Family

    A young girl possessed by a Demon, writes an epic in which she demonstrates the Demon as her God, Christ, because he is harmless and inspirational.

    wind Logliner
    Added an answer on January 3, 2018 at 1:26 pm

    Writes an epic isn't a compelling enough verb for me to watch the film Are we supposed to sit with the popcorns while she "writes"

    Writes an epic isn’t a compelling enough verb for me to watch the film
    Are we supposed to sit with the popcorns while she “writes”

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  2. Posted: October 27, 2017In: Family

    Impeached president moves back to her hometown in disgrace to pursue a new dream: balancing family life….while grooming her shy and nerdy kids for careers in politics.

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    Added an answer on October 29, 2017 at 9:44 pm

    I personally think this COULD be an interesting story, but you need to have much more going on in the second act of your plot. Right now, the disgraced president just moves back to his hometown to balance his family life. That's not enough for an interesting concept. What if he tried to prove his inRead more

    I personally think this COULD be an interesting story, but you need to have much more going on in the second act of your plot.
    Right now, the disgraced president just moves back to his hometown to balance his family life. That’s not enough for an interesting concept.
    What if he tried to prove his innocence before he gets impeached or even after the impeachment process.
    If you look at current series like “House of Cards” or “Designated Survivor”, there is a great opportunity for writers to mix politics with dramatical elements.
    But, as I said, a family life can’t be your whole plot for the second act.

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  3. Posted: October 23, 2017In: Family

    When he arrives for a year in america, a reserved french student must learn to adapt to make the most out of the experience.

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    Added an answer on October 24, 2017 at 3:18 am

    That's the thing.? If you want to write a sort of memoir, or biography, that's fine, maybe you don't need a logline. If you want to write a marketeable fiction, you need conflict, clear goal, a sharp logline that states all very clearly. Have a look at the examples section. See how clear the conflicRead more

    That’s the thing.? If you want to write a sort of memoir, or biography, that’s fine, maybe you don’t need a logline. If you want to write a marketeable fiction, you need conflict, clear goal, a sharp logline that states all very clearly. Have a look at the examples section. See how clear the conflict, the goal and everything are.

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