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When an evil mystic escapes the mystic realm and into the real world, two meddlesome teens must stop the mystic from plunging their world into chaos.
When a evil mysic manifest from a unknown realm it's up to two awkward teens to stop him before he plunges the entire world into chaos.
When a evil mysic manifest from a unknown realm it’s up to two awkward teens to stop him before he plunges the entire world into chaos.
See lessUnable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a gifted young teacher comes to work for a family that has been beset by tragedy and serendipitously changes all their lives for the better
I think you have to work with the word “comes to”… this has to be a something she has to do … or else… So maybe something like.. Unable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a young teacher loses her job and therefor comes to work for a man and his disciplined children while he looks foRead more
I think you have to work with the word “comes to”… this has to be a something she has to do … or else…
So maybe something like..
Unable to conceive children and desperate to be a mother, a young teacher loses her job and therefor comes to work for a man and his disciplined children while he looks for a suitable wife.
See lessTwo California girls must cooperate and stop a psychotic cat lady from releasing the big cats from their cages and terrorizing the school kids and the entire zoo.
Hi RallGamm97 I find the logline as it is written a little bit confusing. Where are the cats coming from and who are the kids? Is there a school right next to the zoo? Why do only the kids and the zoo get terrorised when she releases them? Is she a zookeeper? Also, California girls is a vague descriRead more
Hi RallGamm97
I find the logline as it is written a little bit confusing. Where are the cats coming from and who are the kids? Is there a school right next to the zoo? Why do only the kids and the zoo get terrorised when she releases them? Is she a zookeeper? Also, California girls is a vague description to me, and we get from the rest of the logline that they have to cooperate. Maybe try to distill this one down to the three major elements of a logline: “Protagonist +. Struggle with Antagonist + Death Stakes (literal or metaphorical).”
For example: “Two quarrelling girls must stop a psychotic zoo keeper from unleashing the vicious great cats close to a ground school.”
Hope the helps
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