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  1. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Family

    As the mother to an anarchic off-grid drop-out family dies in another state, the bewidowed father has to get there with all his kids to get hold off her body and burn her as she wished for.

    Richiev Singularity
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 1:51 pm

    I am just attempting to make the logline more clear. ----- "After his ex dies, a prepper father and his children must leave their secluded off-grid home to fulfill his former wife's dying wish."

    I am just attempting to make the logline more clear.
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    “After his ex dies, a prepper father and his children must leave their secluded off-grid home to fulfill his former wife’s dying wish.”

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2021In: Family

    When his kids are kidnapped, a workaholic lawyer must return to his childhood and discover who he really is in order to save them.

    Gamling Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 7, 2021 at 12:15 am

    Very clean logline. Since I first didn't know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film. Good word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a piRead more

    Very clean logline. Since I first didn’t know which movie this was, I pictured a dark thriller movie, but now knowing which film we are talking about, I must re-visit this film.
    Good word describing our hero, which tells us what he must put aside in order to solve his problems. It also gives us a picture of him somewhat neglecting his children at the start and not only have to save them, but also change his behaviour.

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  3. Posted: August 15, 2021In: Family

    A boy and his friends must cross dimensions to stop an evil dictator from merging both worlds.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on August 17, 2021 at 9:26 am

    Sounds fun, since FAM genre - consider the following: 1. Who is this boy and what was the circumstance the upended his balance? 2. When the boy teams up with his friends – does that form something with a cool name e.g., “World Warriors!" Cheesy I know – you get the point 😉. 3. Is there a fun way orRead more

    Sounds fun, since FAM genre – consider the following:
    1. Who is this boy and what was the circumstance the upended his balance?
    2. When the boy teams up with his friends – does that form something with a cool name e.g., “World Warriors!” Cheesy I know – you get the point 😉.
    3. Is there a fun way or mysterious location to “cross dimensions”?
    4. Hard to envision what “merging” will look like on-screen, think of the goal of your baddie and use that.

    Keep going!

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