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about an elderly samurai named Genjiro who doesn’t grow up? He gets taken in by his granddaughter and her partner. He has as a childhood friend and love interest a la Wendy Darling and she also rapidly ages. There’s a girl whom he shares advice with.
This isn't really a logline. The format would be: When [inciting event] occurs, a [character and their description] must [dynamic action] to overcome [obstacle].
This isn’t really a logline. The format would be: When [inciting event] occurs, a [character and their description] must [dynamic action] to overcome [obstacle].
See lessAfter becoming the sole survivor of his adventuring party a barbarian now protects the town’s children by slaying the monsters under their beds. But when a rise in monster attacks threatens everyone, he must overcome his survivor’s guilt and PTSD to save the town.
You might have to explain better where the PTSD comes from, but it's okay since we see who the protagonist is, what he does, the threat and his target. I would make it shorter.
You might have to explain better where the PTSD comes from, but it’s okay since we see who the protagonist is, what he does, the threat and his target. I would make it shorter.
See lessIn the arid plains of the Far West of Aredon, we follow the adventures of Caleb “Lee” Leezard, a solitary bounty hunter in search of the origins of his strange power, and the powerful Baron Von Falkenrath who tries to seize it at any cost.
When a disciplined, solitary bounty hunter learns his strange power originates from a greedy Baron, who is trying to seize it back at any cost, he must now learn to integrate this power or for ever suffer a life of loneliness. theme = solitary power leads to loneliness protagonist's want = to be aloRead more
When a disciplined, solitary bounty hunter
learns his strange power originates from a greedy Baron, who is trying to seize it back at any cost,
he must now learn to integrate this power or for ever suffer a life of loneliness.
theme = solitary power leads to loneliness
protagonist’s want = to be alone
protagonist’s need = friendship
Consider adding a likablity trait to protagonist, suggestion might be positive qualities of a disciplined character.
Consider adding a negative trait to antagonist, suggestion might be greediness, for power in this case.
This logline contains Character, Plot, but no clear Theme. Consider how Character’s main goal and traits relate to a story message.
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