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  1. Posted: November 6, 2019In: Fantasy

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    Mike Pedley Singularity
    Added an answer on November 6, 2019 at 7:00 pm

    "A solitary traveller who magically spreads joy to others"... If you're referring to Santa Claus, say Santa Claus. If it's not Santa Claus... I'm wondering why it's not Santa Claus hahaha. I agree with thedarkhorse, the 1926 LA setting is somewhat irrelevant in this film. Nothing would change if thiRead more

    “A solitary traveller who magically spreads joy to others”… If you’re referring to Santa Claus, say Santa Claus. If it’s not Santa Claus… I’m wondering why it’s not Santa Claus hahaha.

    I agree with thedarkhorse, the 1926 LA setting is somewhat irrelevant in this film. Nothing would change if this film was set in the modern day. Only include the “time period” if the story simply could not be told at other time.

    Why is the toy-making capitalist thwarting the protagonist’s quest to find his family? It seems like a very “evil for the sake of evil” motive. I can understand why a toymaking capitalist would want to dominate Christmas and take over from Santa – the 1985 Christmas classic, Santa Claus: the Movie is exactly that (if you haven’t seen it, watch it!), but that’s not what’s going on here… he’s trying to stop this guy finding his family?? Makes no sense. How does the antagonist even know that he’s looking for his family?

    I would suggest putting this in the “Family” category. Sounds like a perfect family film to me.

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  2. Posted: October 27, 2019In: Fantasy

    Back in time

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    Jo Logliner
    Added an answer on October 28, 2019 at 5:54 am

    Back in time A hapless financier checks into an exclusive? 5-star hotel in order to woo a billionaire investor, but finds himself haunted by the ghost of a eight year old girl shrieking to be taken back ?home?. Terrified of losing the deal and his sanity, he begs for the help of a beautiful but treaRead more

    Back in time

    A hapless financier checks into an exclusive? 5-star hotel in order to woo a billionaire investor, but finds himself haunted by the ghost of a eight year old girl shrieking to be taken back ?home?. Terrified of losing the deal and his sanity, he begs for the help of a beautiful but treacherous spiritualist while he seals the deal of a lifetime.

    ???

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  3. Posted: October 10, 2019In: Fantasy

    Para uma webserie

    Neer Shelter Singularity
    Added an answer on October 12, 2019 at 11:54 am

    What's going on with all these Spanish posts?! Please post in English only.

    What’s going on with all these Spanish posts?!

    Please post in English only.

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