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A sleepaholic student from Los Angeles is determined to find the girl in his dreams, eventually leading him to a spiritual world called soul space, an intermediate dimension which exists between heaven and hell
>>>what if the inciting incident is a major twist?Very good question.? If it's a major twist then it may be a good candidate for a story? hook, something that captures reader interest, makes them want to read the script.And logines are sales pitches -- not teasers.? So never withhold or burRead more
>>>what if the inciting incident is a major twist?
Very good question.? If it’s a major twist then it may be a good candidate for a story? hook, something that captures reader interest, makes them want to read the script.
And logines are sales pitches — not teasers.? So never withhold or bury a story hook.
Major twists that occur in the 1st Act should be in the logline.? Major twists that occur at the end of Act 2 or in Act 3 should never be in a logline. — that would constitute a spoiler.
Another variation:? the twist can be ironical:? something the audience knows about but the protagonist? discovers much later.? Such is the case with the logline I posted for the movie “The Bank Job”.? The audience is in on the story twist from the start, that the motley crew has been set up.? ?But only at the midpoint, after pulling off the heist, do they discover they’ve been set up.
See lessA hunter/slayer hybrid woman takes on the world’s monster in her normal life Seattle, which changes when she meets a sorcerer who is cursed to live in the shadows.
By monsters, she battles Cali Liberals, right?
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See lessAfter a talented teenager foretold to be their future-supervillain is kicked out of the “planet of the heroes”, he discovers that the prophecies are infact a ploy by the great seer to usurp the throne and bring back the age of dark magic.
Take 2 "After the prophecy robs him of his superpowers, an exiled hero discovers the oracle, conspiring to bring back the dark age"
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“After the prophecy robs him of his superpowers, an exiled hero discovers the oracle, conspiring to bring back the dark age”
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