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  1. Posted: August 29, 2016In: Fantasy

    Slated for Banishment on her sixteenth birthday, a young warrior must elude capture, rescue her best friend and hope her own twist doesn?t mutate further in the process. If they do manage to escape, Keira will have to face her nightmares, the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and survive long enough to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.

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    Added an answer on August 29, 2016 at 7:07 pm

    Her own twist? Leave world-building for the actual screenplay and try focusing just on the core story and protagonist and you will find your word count will drop dramatically. Hope this helps.

    Her own twist? Leave world-building for the actual screenplay and try focusing just on the core story and protagonist and you will find your word count will drop dramatically. Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Fantasy

    In the future, all mental Illness is illegal. After a teen?s girlfriend is taken away due to early detection of a mental defect, he searches to find an error with the brain scanning machine but uncovers a dark secret.

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    Added an answer on August 29, 2016 at 4:54 am

    What Nir Shelter said. ?What become his objective goal when he finds the error? ?What must he do about it?

    What Nir Shelter said. ?What become his objective goal when he finds the error? ?What must he do about it?

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2016In: Fantasy

    When the Devil steals the Grim Reaper’s power source, her scythe, releasing the undead on the earth, Death must reunite with her estranged brothers, regain her powers and stop the Apocalypse.

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    Added an answer on August 29, 2016 at 1:27 am

    I am assuming that Death and the Grim Reaper are the same person? It feels a little unclear. I agree that the devil is a little too (easy? ). Try picking a specific one .......Maybe Lucifer or one of the minions. ?I can see the connection between loosing the scythe and the Apocalypse.......lots of dRead more

    I am assuming that Death and the Grim Reaper are the same person? It feels a little unclear. I agree that the devil is a little too (easy? ). Try picking a specific one …….Maybe Lucifer or one of the minions. ?I can see the connection between loosing the scythe and the Apocalypse…….lots of dead people roaming the streets would certainly look like the Apocalypse. I like the concept.
    Estranged brother…….what about him will help the quest? Is he a fallen angel? Need more drama. ? ?:)

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