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Two teenagers in a coma meet in a transition state in the afterlife and discover they?re soulmates with a decision to make on whether or not to return to their prior lives.
Very neat idea. Feels a bit wordy. Would it work for your story to clarify one of the teens as the MC? I don't know your story like you do, but could something like this work? When a teen falls into a coma and meets her soulmate, she must convince him to fight for his life or choose between her ownRead more
Very neat idea.
Feels a bit wordy.
Would it work for your story to clarify one of the teens as the MC?
I don’t know your story like you do, but could something like this work?
When a teen falls into a coma and meets her soulmate, she must convince him to fight for his life or choose between her own life and following him into the light.
Mine is too wordy, as well, but I hope it helps.
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Thanks DPG! This gives me quite a bit to chew on. Gonna give it another go and write some more variations and share when I have them ready. Thanks so much for the time to respond!
Thanks DPG! This gives me quite a bit to chew on. Gonna give it another go and write some more variations and share when I have them ready. Thanks so much for the time to respond!
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And then what? ?The logline establishes an interesting platform, a situation, from which to launch a plot. ?But it doesn't launch a ?plot. What becomes the protagonist's objective goal? ?(BTW: characters need not be named in the logline.) ?Who/what opposes him? And the "so what?" factor: ?what's atRead more
And then what? ?The logline establishes an interesting platform, a situation, from which to launch a plot. ?But it doesn’t launch a ?plot.
What becomes the protagonist’s objective goal? ?(BTW: characters need not be named in the logline.) ?Who/what opposes him?
And the “so what?” factor: ?what’s at stake? ?What does he stand to gain if he succeeds, lose if he fails?
I suggest consulting the guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page for tips on how to write a logline that launches a plot.
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