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A blind boy who helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer must now prove that he witnessed the crimes and convince the police that a demonic entity is the real culprit behind the recent homicides.
"blind boy" = protagonist "helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer" = inciting incident "must prove he witnessed the crimes" = main character goal Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual's witness of a crime woRead more
“blind boy” = protagonist
“helps police identify and apprehend a possessed serial killer” = inciting incident
“must prove he witnessed the crimes” = main character goal
Seems the playfulness of this logline, might be the contrast of blindness vs. sight. How a blind individual’s witness of a crime would probably provide less useable evidence. But how this might link to a demonic entity, as the real homicide culprit, is the real challenge.
An important quality of story, is for the audience to first empathise with the main character. Tell us a little about the boy, not just his blindness, but one or two words describing his psychology. Courageous, weak, adventurous, timid … these are relatable qualities. That determine how he might relate to inciting incident events. That affect how he might emotionally respond to main goal struggles.
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Wolf has always been a loner. He was always humble, and women rejected him. one day he heard of a priestess; and he decided to look for her She tells him of a ritual. But she didn't tell him that, after the ritual, He would be a vampire; She said he would be powerful and rich. But for that to happenRead more
Wolf has always been a loner.
See lessHe was always humble, and women rejected him.
one day he heard of a priestess;
and he decided to look for her
She tells him of a ritual.
But she didn’t tell him that, after the ritual,
He would be a vampire;
She said he would be powerful and rich.
But for that to happen, he had before he died,
Then he would live forever
Bloodlust
Aphrodite dies, after a strange disease. Mike travels to get the relic, an old man steals the piece of the cross to Mike. The relic is placed in the heart of Aphrodite, in a ritual, Aphrodite back to life, when she sees that she is in a chapel, she runs to out, yelling, she does not support the sacrRead more
Aphrodite dies, after a strange disease.
See lessMike travels to get the relic, an old man steals the piece of the cross to Mike.
The relic is placed in the heart of Aphrodite, in a ritual, Aphrodite back to life, when she sees that she is in a chapel, she runs to out, yelling, she does not support the sacred place.All people think, is strange, the new behavior of Aphrodite, sleeps by day and night, she goes out.