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When a girl addicted to her phone learns that the phone also is addicted to her and won’t let her go, she must find a way to get rid of it before it destroys all aspects of her life. Be it personal, professional, financial, social, physical and spiritual. All aspects are affected.
Always limit a logline to once sentence, 25-30 words, without commas when appropriate. Include the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes. Try to end on the hook, the inherent irony, so people think "Oh that's interesting..." If they like the logline, they want to read more. Additional detailRead more
Always limit a logline to once sentence, 25-30 words, without commas when appropriate. Include the protagonist, antagonist, conflict, and stakes. Try to end on the hook, the inherent irony, so people think “Oh that’s interesting…” If they like the logline, they want to read more. Additional detail belongs in a summary, synopsis, or treatment they can then request.
And never start with “When,” despite the popular formula. People react to people, not events — tell them who the main character is and what that person struggles with in the story. That’s the draw of the movie.
It’s also good to convey the genre and tone, so folks know what kind of story it is. Comedy and tragedy have the same dramatic elements, but they don’t play the same — be sure your readers know what kind of script they’re in for.
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A teenage girl must break her smartphone addiction before it destroys her life, once the advanced device becomes emotionally attached to her as well.
With a killer on the rampage in forested upstate New York during the late 1960’s, a sensitive young African-American woman must overcome her insecurities to protect her friends and apprehend the deranged maniac.
Leaning towards: Deep in the forests of 1960s upstate New York, a timid African American is forced to defend her hippy friends when a maniac killer shatters their newfound commune.
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See lessDeep in the forests of 1960s upstate New York, a timid African American is forced to defend her hippy friends when a maniac killer shatters their newfound commune.
A young man in the quaint town of Ravens Circle must confront his deepest fears to uncover the eerie secrets that bind him to the malevolent force terrorizing his community before it consumes everything he holds dear.
Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can't visualiseRead more
Has potential, but is currently too vague. We need specificity in loglines. He must confront his deepest fears – what are they? Is this set in our world or a fantasy world? What time period? What is the malevolent force and how is it terrorising his community? Without specificity, we can’t visualise the story and the logline has no impact.
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