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A tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary mind uploading and artificial brain technologies, only for her to become a robotic killer endangering everyone including their children.
This is clear and sounds like a very intriguing script. The only thing that staggered me, and which I'd suggest deleting, is "mind uploading and artificial." So you'd be left with: A tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary brain technologieRead more
This is clear and sounds like a very intriguing script. The only thing that staggered me, and which I’d suggest deleting, is “mind uploading and artificial.” So you’d be left with:
A tragic accident drives a Nobel laureate neuroscientist to resurrect his wife with his revolutionary brain technologies, only for her to become a robotic killer endangering everyone including their children.
See lessThree reckless, wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills embark on another hedonistic night abroad—only to cross paths with a mysterious girl and her friend who turn the tables, dragging them into a terrifying game where their darkest habits become their worst nightmare.
Intriguing, but at 46 words, it runs a bit long. Could be shortened, something like: Three wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills cross paths with two girls who turn their darkest habits into their worst nightmare.
Intriguing, but at 46 words, it runs a bit long. Could be shortened, something like:
Three wealthy American playboys who treat women as disposable thrills cross paths with two girls who turn their darkest habits into their worst nightmare.
See lessAs Judea fractures under Roman pressure, a paranoid client king orders mass slaughter to preserve power, while a meek couple suffers the brutal consequences of divine favor.
The logline juggles too many balls. An effective logline (one that makes an executive want to read the script) is succinct (30 words or less) and sells the sizzle, not the steak. What is the sizzle in your concept?
The logline juggles too many balls. An effective logline (one that makes an executive want to read the script) is succinct (30 words or less) and sells the sizzle, not the steak.
What is the sizzle in your concept?
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