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  1. Posted: July 13, 2016In: Horror

    Fleeing an unseen force controlling their minds, an old man and his two nieces hijack a woman’s car only to discover she’s already picked up a familiar hitchhiker.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on July 14, 2016 at 12:39 pm

    Good points by Nir Shelter. ?Especially about the need for a consistent "dramatic mechanism" ?that sustains the motivation of the character from episode to episode. And creates endless complications -- that propels the plotline forward. ?The producer will want to sense that about the character."DextRead more

    Good points by Nir Shelter. ?Especially about the need for a consistent “dramatic mechanism” ?that sustains the motivation of the character from episode to episode. And creates endless complications — that propels the plotline forward. ?The producer will want to sense that about the character.

    “Dexter” is a good example. He’s gotta kill — that’s his psychopathology, the compulsion that drives him, that complicates his professional and personal life in every episode. ?Dexter’s defining characteristic was the hook for series.

    What’s the character hook in this series? ?

    It’s the characters not the situations that lay the foundation for a series.

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  2. Posted: July 10, 2016In: Horror

    When a popular school clique viciously beats a boy to death because a two-faced classmate cried rape, 20 years later, a horribly disfigured 7ft. butcher traps them at a fake high school reunion to exact raw vengeance with a billhook.

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    Added an answer on July 11, 2016 at 7:20 pm

    I miss a main character, and an inciting event (in the present). The 'butcher' feels not organic, not specific to THIS?story.

    I miss a main character, and an inciting event (in the present). The ‘butcher’ feels not organic, not specific to THIS?story.

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  3. Posted: July 7, 2016In: Horror

    A bookstore owner must re-live his father’s murder, stay alive, and protect his friends when the murderer escapes from an asylum transfer.

    Marcello Lanfranchi Logliner
    Added an answer on July 8, 2016 at 3:51 am

    By "relive," do you mean he has to experience the murder from his father's perspective?

    By “relive,” do you mean he has to experience the murder from his father’s perspective?

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