1. Posted: October 31, 2021In:

    Madrid, the beginning of the seventies of the last century. A girl is born marked by a chilling, temporary possession of her mother. Madrid, at the beginning of the nineties, twenty years later, the same protagonist, turned into a medium, faces the spirit of her best friend.

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    There is a lot going on in your logline and wondering how you can make it more concise. Maybe something like this: Claudia Vázquez, a medium and parapsychologist, must find a way to defeat a demonic spirit that has haunted her since the womb.

    There is a lot going on in your logline and wondering how you can make it more concise. Maybe something like this:

    Claudia Vázquez, a medium and parapsychologist, must find a way to defeat a demonic spirit that has haunted her since the womb.

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  2. Posted: November 3, 2021In:

    When the family of S Brothers, who have made their fortune by making B- Grade horror movies, shifts to a palatial mansion, the family members starts getting disappearing mysteriously by the evil characters created by them in their movies, the to-be daughter-in-law has to bring them back before it is too late.

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    Odie Samurai

    Sounds fun, leaning towards: “B-horror making brothers must fight to survive their manifested evil characters when filming in a haunted mansion” Add color by giving the mansion a name, possibly something synonymous with / notorious for being evil.

    Sounds fun, leaning towards:
    “B-horror making brothers must fight to survive their manifested evil characters when filming in a haunted mansion”

    Add color by giving the mansion a name, possibly something synonymous with / notorious for being evil.

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  3. Posted: October 11, 2021In:

    Feeling abandoned by the world, a young man drops everything and goes away for a weekend camping trip. Things soon turn ugly when a cult family comes looking for some sacrifices for the unseen howling creatures lurking in the nearby woods.

    Odie Samurai

    Leaning towards: “An adrift young man must fight to survive a cannibalistic cult on a nightmare camping trip from hell” Add color: Who is this young man? I took liberties with your cult – what kind of cult are you referring to? What are these howling creatures? Is this a monster/werewolf flic? If soRead more

    Leaning towards:
    “An adrift young man must fight to survive a cannibalistic cult on a nightmare camping trip from hell”

    Add color:
    Who is this young man?
    I took liberties with your cult – what kind of cult are you referring to?
    What are these howling creatures? Is this a monster/werewolf flic? If so, focus your logline around this.

    Hope you find this constructive, keep going!

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