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  1. Posted: November 7, 2020In: Horror

    When a family member haunts them as a ghost, two dysfunctional families must cope with either life or death.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 7, 2020 at 8:36 pm

    Sorry, this tells us nothing. Please go through the formula tab on the top. It's quite awesome :))

    Sorry, this tells us nothing. Please go through the formula tab on the top. It’s quite awesome :))

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  2. Posted: November 7, 2020In: Horror

    After stealing a mysterious present on Christmas Eve, a selfish little boy must repent or be devoured by a monstrous elf.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 7, 2020 at 3:35 am

    what's stopping him from repenting?

    what’s stopping him from repenting?

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  3. Posted: June 13, 2017In: Horror

    When his medication suddenly stops working, a contentedly married man must endure terrifying Hypnotic Regressions in search of an answer to his mysterious and debilitating condition. (26)

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    Added an answer on November 4, 2020 at 10:36 pm

    You've posted it under 'Horror' but the way you have pitched It, doesn't seem like a very active-action. At the most I hope him to get better soon but I'm not with him on this journey. It would be helpful if you elaborated on both the 'hypnotic regressions' & his 'mysterious and debilitating conRead more

    You’ve posted it under ‘Horror’ but the way you have pitched It, doesn’t seem like a very active-action. At the most I hope him to get better soon but I’m not with him on this journey.

    It would be helpful if you elaborated on both the ‘hypnotic regressions’ & his ‘mysterious and debilitating condition’

    What does his condition make him do? And as a result of this ‘regression’ what becomes his objective goal? Try making it more visual.

    hope this helps 🙂

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