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When his medication suddenly stops working, a contentedly married man must endure terrifying Hypnotic Regressions in search of an answer to his mysterious and debilitating condition. (26)
You've posted it under 'Horror' but the way you have pitched It, doesn't seem like a very active-action. At the most I hope him to get better soon but I'm not with him on this journey. It would be helpful if you elaborated on both the 'hypnotic regressions' & his 'mysterious and debilitating conRead more
You’ve posted it under ‘Horror’ but the way you have pitched It, doesn’t seem like a very active-action. At the most I hope him to get better soon but I’m not with him on this journey.
It would be helpful if you elaborated on both the ‘hypnotic regressions’ & his ‘mysterious and debilitating condition’
What does his condition make him do? And as a result of this ‘regression’ what becomes his objective goal? Try making it more visual.
hope this helps 🙂
See lessA group of high school students’ carnival gone awry when aliens and zombies invade their town.
Party on! 😉 I simplified the baddies into one – easier for me to consume. Also, I envisioned an abduction scenario, and since most occur at night here you go: “A group of band geeks must survive the night when z-aliens begin to abduct their graduation house party guests” Take care.
Party on! 😉
I simplified the baddies into one – easier for me to consume. Also, I envisioned an abduction scenario, and since most occur at night here you go:
“A group of band geeks must survive the night when z-aliens begin to abduct their graduation house party guests”
Take care.
See lessLogline: A hardened cyber crimes analyst must shut down the source of a cursed smartphone app that seems to kill people who use it before the app strikes its next targets, her estranged family.
I like the premise. It reminds me of the Ring. Just needs a little polish. When you have “ that seems to” take that out. In my opinion apps can be used on many devices so “smartphone” may be remove. I feel you run into more conflict that way which makes the story mor interesting. Keep up the hard woRead more
I like the premise. It reminds me of the Ring. Just needs a little polish. When you have “ that seems to” take that out. In my opinion apps can be used on many devices so “smartphone” may be remove. I feel you run into more conflict that way which makes the story mor interesting. Keep up the hard work.
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