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After her brother’s death, a college student must track down someone who created a deadly video streaming online who kills anyone who watches it.
Most of your loglines have the same issue. They are simply an inciting incident. That's it! It's incredibly frustrating to constantly write the same feedback over and over without it ever seemingly making any difference. If you want to learn, then great, let's learn together as a community of loglinRead more
Most of your loglines have the same issue. They are simply an inciting incident. That’s it!
It’s incredibly frustrating to constantly write the same feedback over and over without it ever seemingly making any difference. If you want to learn, then great, let’s learn together as a community of logliners. If you don’t want to learn, then expect people to stop reviewing and you’re on your own.
See lessA ten year-old hearing and speech-impaired boy evolves from prey to predator in a battle against a group of masked killers savaging homeowners on Halloween.
I like this, the logline could be tightened up though. Also, for the logline, ensure the killer's focus is ON this boy’s house – not the ambiguous people on his block. Leaning towards: “A deaf-mute boy must evolve from prey to predator when a group of masked killers invades his home on Halloween” HoRead more
I like this, the logline could be tightened up though. Also, for the logline, ensure the killer’s focus is ON this boy’s house – not the ambiguous people on his block.
Leaning towards:
“A deaf-mute boy must evolve from prey to predator when a group of masked killers invades his home on Halloween”
Hope this helps, take care.
See lessWhen a family member haunts them as a ghost, two dysfunctional families must cope with either life or death.
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Sorry, this tells us nothing. Please go through the formula tab on the top. It’s quite awesome :))
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