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  1. Posted: February 7, 2020In: Horror

    When a cursed camera captures pictures of predestined murders, a cakera collector must unravel mysteries of the occult device to stop her husband’s gruesome fate.

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    Added an answer on February 24, 2020 at 3:32 am

    It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that. To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about. I also secoRead more

    It?s a very solid re-work so major kudos on that.

    To start, I would flip the two parts of the logline. ?Set the characters and the inciting incident at the beginning (she sees the death through the camera) and then get into the stakes/Why the action is worth writing a whole script about.

    I also second dpg, make sure you are specifc on what the camera can actually do. ?Is it a camera that causes/sets death in motion like the video in The Ring or does it predict the circumstances around death like the pictures taken in Final Destination 3?

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2020In: Horror

    A husband begins an affair with his dream woman using lucid dreaming technology, but when this fantasy woman begins stalking his family in real life, he must protect them from a woman who shouldn?t exist.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2020 at 6:21 am

    I'm a little confused by the threat. Is the digital woman communicating with the family? Does she now have a body? The trap feels pretty central.

    I’m a little confused by the threat. Is the digital woman communicating with the family? Does she now have a body? The trap feels pretty central.

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  3. Posted: January 28, 2020In: Horror

    A man with multiple personality disorder is being held captive by a murderous cult or his own personalities. He must rescue a girl who may or may not exist and escape.

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    Added an answer on February 9, 2020 at 8:23 am

    This is a different take, but make of it what you will:"When a lone schizophrenic experiences relapse he must regain trust from the girl of his dreams whom holds partial control of his ever hostile subconscious."

    This is a different take, but make of it what you will:

    “When a lone schizophrenic experiences relapse he must regain trust from the girl of his dreams whom holds partial control of his ever hostile subconscious.”

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