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After having her first same-sex encounter, a young girl is being attacked by a masked killer.
It is a bit lacklustre; we're not told much about the young girl; what does her having her first same-sex experience have to do with the rest of the logline? Seems as though it was thrown in there for some sort of plot without thinking it through. It doesn't tell us much, just a generic horror/teenRead more
It is a bit lacklustre; we’re not told much about the young girl; what does her having her first same-sex experience have to do with the rest of the logline? Seems as though it was thrown in there for some sort of plot without thinking it through. It doesn’t tell us much, just a generic horror/teen movie logline without the personality.
See lessA college student has a superstition that people killed at a music festival she goes to.
Hi tony18, To me, this is what you are trying to say: "A college student has a premonition that there will be a massacre at a music festival she is going to attend." But I think the logline above should be co continued with "and", and you should mention what the college student does about it. I hopeRead more
Hi tony18,
To me, this is what you are trying to say:
“A college student has a premonition that there will be a massacre at a music festival she is going to attend.”
But I think the logline above should be co continued with “and”, and you should mention what the college student does about it.
I hope this helps
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A nature-loving environmental student discovers a sentient fungi is causing holiday makers on a remote campsite to consume petrochemicals – and then each other.
Hi SuzyMiller, Here's what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis: But I believe there's more to this story. I know there's a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write. While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is tRead more
Hi SuzyMiller,
Here’s what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis:
But I believe there’s more to this story. I know there’s a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write.
While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is turning campers into petrochemicals-consuming cannibals and must ……..(do what?)
I hope this helps
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