1. Posted: September 9, 2022In:

    A nature-loving environmental student discovers a sentient fungi is causing holiday makers on a remote campsite to consume petrochemicals – and then each other.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi SuzyMiller, Here's what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis: But I believe there's more to this story. I know there's a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write. While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is tRead more

    Hi SuzyMiller,

    Here’s what I see so far based on your proposed logline and synopsis:

    But I believe there’s more to this story. I know there’s a challenge/conflict. Read this logline, use it as a template, and re-write.

    While on holiday at a remote campsite, a student discovers a sentient fungus is turning campers into petrochemicals-consuming cannibals and must ……..(do what?)

    I hope this helps
    Good Luck

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2022In:

    After being bullied and left for dead, a high school student returns from the dead as a ghost to kill her tormentors in their dreams.

    BenGilani Logliner

    Hi tony18, This is how I see it: A high school student's ghost returns to kill those who tormentors and left him for dead. I hope this helps

    Hi tony18,

    This is how I see it:

    A high school student’s ghost returns to kill those who tormentors and left him for dead.

    I hope this helps

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2022In:

    A writer obsessed with the number 13 goes on a race against time loop to relive her serial killer alter ego’s murders the very same day.

    Angelous vera Penpusher

    Interesante.

    Interesante.

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