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The house was build on one of the seven gates to Hell.? Six are closed -- just one to go, but ---- the owner of the doomed house? -- the last librarian -- is in debt with the Devil himself.The contract says:He? has seven years to rent the house and pay of seven? million dollars.-- seven tv seasons oRead more
The house was build on one of the seven gates to Hell.? Six are closed — just one to go, but —
— the owner of the doomed house? — the last librarian — is in debt with the Devil himself.
The contract says:
He? has seven years to rent the house and pay of seven? million dollars.– seven tv seasons of pure Hell.
The Devil can only open the gates to hell if the owner of the house can not pay his debts in time.
Some of the people who rent the house are send by the Devil to open the gate, others are just at the wrong place at the wrong time, or aren’t they. It’s all? for a good cause –keeping the gate closed.,
All of the guests are made to believe the constant haunting is part of the new “Westworld” experience. So they pay much more for renting the house than would be normal.
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After finding herself trapped in the afterlife whilst attempting to contact her deceased mother, a neglected young girl must battle through the land of the dead to find a way back to the living or risk being trapped forever.As variable recommended, check out the rules and try and start with the inciRead more
After finding herself trapped in the afterlife whilst attempting to contact her deceased mother, a neglected young girl must battle through the land of the dead to find a way back to the living or risk being trapped forever.
As variable recommended, check out the rules and try and start with the inciting incident, then the goal, then the stakes. My example is a bit wordy and is probably not the story you have in mind but you get the idea.
I think MarinaM might be asking if her age and whether her mother being recently deceased is significant enough to include in the logline. In my mind, they are only significant if something else in the logline makes them so. If the mother being recently deceased is critical to the girl being able to contact her then include the reason as the ticking clock aspect of the logline e.g. before her mother is lost in the afterlife. With the information above, I think just calling her young could save you a couple of words without losing anything.
Hope this helps.
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