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A neglected eight-year-old girl comes up with a dangerous idea to try and communicate with her recently deceased mother on Halloween.
After finding herself trapped in the afterlife whilst attempting to contact her deceased mother, a neglected young girl must battle through the land of the dead to find a way back to the living or risk being trapped forever.As variable recommended, check out the rules and try and start with the inciRead more
After finding herself trapped in the afterlife whilst attempting to contact her deceased mother, a neglected young girl must battle through the land of the dead to find a way back to the living or risk being trapped forever.
As variable recommended, check out the rules and try and start with the inciting incident, then the goal, then the stakes. My example is a bit wordy and is probably not the story you have in mind but you get the idea.
I think MarinaM might be asking if her age and whether her mother being recently deceased is significant enough to include in the logline. In my mind, they are only significant if something else in the logline makes them so. If the mother being recently deceased is critical to the girl being able to contact her then include the reason as the ticking clock aspect of the logline e.g. before her mother is lost in the afterlife. With the information above, I think just calling her young could save you a couple of words without losing anything.
Hope this helps.
See lessAfter smiles directed at her begin to distort into terrifying grins, a depressed actress must find the origin before it affects everyone she knows.
Sounds intriguing as a trailer (more so after the soundtrack!!) But currently she has 2 objectives - to figure out why she's the only one and then stop it from spreading to her close ones, both of which are hard to visualize. Edit with a specific visual objective, like how can she prevent it...and yRead more
Sounds intriguing as a trailer (more so after the soundtrack!!) But currently she has 2 objectives – to figure out why she’s the only one and then stop it from spreading to her close ones, both of which are hard to visualize.
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Good Luck mikepedley85!!
When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, the high school film club, stranded in the wilderness, must use all their skills and movie knowledge to stay alive until help arrives.
Beyond the need for a clear protagonist, this sounds interesting,
Beyond the need for a clear protagonist, this sounds interesting,
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