1. Posted: January 24, 2018In:

    When an arcane creature disembowels several Asian women in 1900s San Francisco, a war-weary army officer must team with a disparate group of social outcasts to expose the corrupt city leaders behind the monster?s bloodbath.

    KellyK1981 Penpusher

    Thanks for the feedback, guys! I'll work on it and hopefully post an edited logline soon.

    Thanks for the feedback, guys! I’ll work on it and hopefully post an edited logline soon.

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  2. Posted: January 19, 2018In:

    “Claudia V?zquez is the most prestigious and reputed parapsychologist in Spain today, who from her early years until her maturity will not stop from facing the paranormal, until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation.”

    Neer Shelter Singularity

    As DPG wrote, you're missing the key ingredients of a plot in the logline. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.

    As DPG wrote, you’re missing the key ingredients of a plot in the logline.

    Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.

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  3. Posted: January 12, 2018In:

    After looking in a bewitched mirror, a schizofrenic superhero suffering from anterograde amnesia must defeat her super vilan alterego in ten nightmares in order to not wake up as evil reincarnated.

    Richiev Singularity

    You may have thrown just a few too many elements into your cocktail.

    You may have thrown just a few too many elements into your cocktail.

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